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发表于 2008-9-9 10:18:07 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">一葉落。風先覺。喚人快把袷衣著。月寒起雁聲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">呼群南方泊。南方泊。幾個音書託。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p></span>
发表于 2008-9-9 11:46:22 | 显示全部楼层
词感觉很好,但我不熟悉这个词牌,“度”字可这样押的吗?
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-9-9 12:39:53 | 显示全部楼层
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>向闲</i>在2008-9-9 11:46:22的发言:</b><br/>词感觉很好,但我不熟悉这个词牌,“度”字可这样押的吗?</div><p>謝謝詞長提點<span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">,我也是第一次填此詞牌<span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">。只顧自查詞林正韻<span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">,卻疏忽了"</span></span></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">度"字依其義分屬去聲及入聲<span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">。改為泊字了<span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">,您看可好<span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">?</span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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发表于 2008-9-9 13:04:58 | 显示全部楼层
感觉泊字顺耳些。
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