奉和仁瑞大兄《悬车自寿》二首

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<p style="WORD-BREAK: break-all;"><font face="宋体"><font color="#0000ff"><font size="5">奉和仁瑞大兄《悬车自寿》二首<br/>一<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></span></font></font></font></p><p style="WORD-BREAK: break-all;"><font face="宋体"><font color="#0000ff"><font size="5"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"></span></span></font></font></font><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">书道诗章细琢磨，夕阳如锦好高歌。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">瀼溪放目风神朗，骚雅潜心乐趣多。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">过隙光阴驰白马，巡天日月荡金梭。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">百年谁厌声名重，莫说秋怀老不波。<br/><br/></font><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">二</font></p><p style="WORD-BREAK: break-all;"><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">平生歌哭岂无端，为有春心一寸丹。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">愤世孤标分厚薄，独行特立傲炎寒。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">珠沉玉重磨雕苦，李栋桃梁灌育难。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">协韵敲声消晚岁，风前月下自盘桓。</font></p><p style="WORD-BREAK: break-all;"><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">附元玉：</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">一</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">莫道浮生尽折磨，也曾自赏也曾歌。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">挑挑拣拣交游少，觅觅寻寻故事多。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">梦醒何妨衾似铁，花零始觉日如梭。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">黄昏难得夕阳好，一笑恩仇任逝波。</font></p><p style="WORD-BREAK: break-all;"><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">二</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">悠悠岁月隐眉端，迟暮依然惜寸丹。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">每叹痴儿轻饱暖，时同老伴忆饥寒。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">平和处世逢源易，冷傲为人举步难。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">有酒盈樽宜薄醉，好将来日细盘桓。</font></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5">注释：悬车，古人对七十岁的称呼。</font></span>

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