乱弹两手

楚鱼 · 发表于 2008-10-27 02:08:13

<p><span mso-bidi-language="" mso-fareast-language="" mso-ansi-language="" mso-font-kerning="" new="" mso-bidi-font-family="Times" mso-hansi-font-family="Times" times="" style="FONT-SIZE: 16.5pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: ;"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312">一</font></strong></span></p><p><span mso-bidi-language="" mso-fareast-language="" mso-ansi-language="" mso-font-kerning="" new="" mso-bidi-font-family="Times" mso-hansi-font-family="Times" times="" style="FONT-SIZE: 16.5pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: ;"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312">当时胜景已难铭，此刻栏杆久未宁。天上有云谁遣意，眼前无处不劳形。风从昨日吹今日，路在长亭接短亭。遥想山川应顾我，明春依旧草青青。</font></strong></span></p><p><span mso-bidi-language="" mso-fareast-language="" mso-ansi-language="" mso-font-kerning="" new="" mso-bidi-font-family="Times" mso-hansi-font-family="Times" times="" style="FONT-SIZE: 16.5pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: ;"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312">二</font></strong></span></p><p><span mso-bidi-language="" mso-fareast-language="" mso-ansi-language="" mso-font-kerning="" new="" mso-bidi-font-family="Times" mso-hansi-font-family="Times" times="" style="FONT-SIZE: 16.5pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: ;"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312">流年无计雁无凭，相揖西风意有冰。一榻清寒回梦处，千秋寂寞读书灯。别愁若织挥难尽，世事如棋了不能。欲破苍茫振衣去，恐留长夜太消凝。</font></strong></span></p>

浔阳倦客 · 发表于 2008-10-27 08:47:13

深婉

楚鱼 · 发表于 2008-10-27 21:58:35

乾坤大挪移呀？回过的贴都没了。再谢过倦客先生。

燕山燕 · 发表于 2008-10-28 08:32:27

佳作！

楚鱼 · 发表于 2008-10-29 18:21:39

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>燕山燕</i>在2008-10-28 8:32:27的发言：</b><br/>佳作！</div><p>问燕山兄好，多谢来访，请多指正。</p>

仰斋 · 发表于 2008-10-29 23:59:57

颇新颖

楚鱼 · 发表于 2008-10-30 22:27:24

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>仰斋</i>在2008-10-29 23:59:57的发言：</b><br/>颇新颖</div><p>谢过仰老和枫露兄来访，问侯！</p>

楚鱼 · 发表于 2008-10-31 19:49:45

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>天堂有鸟</i>在2008-10-31 14:43:50的发言：</b><br/><p>接转流畅,好</p><p><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="5">一榻清寒回梦处，千秋寂寞读书灯。别愁若织挥难尽，世事如棋了不能。=一夜清寒回梦榻，千秋寂寞读书灯。别愁若织挥难尽，世事如棋了不能。</font></strong></p></div><p>谢过天堂有鸟先生来访并仔细推敲．改后工整很多，因尾联有＂夜＂字，另外原句也有点流水的意思．所以拟不改．致问候！</p>

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