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二年未见怀锦弟故以旧作相寻

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发表于 2008-11-27 13:39:00 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><strong>(二)癸未秋十叠一东韵寄怀锦弟</strong></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/></span>独上楼头放眼空,春幡始揭乍朦胧。云蒸水坞腾烟绿,鸟劫山林食杏红。</span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">看院狗催鸡叫曙,扫街人借竹捎风。去年一帚飘零梦,错在归程不省中。</span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><br/></span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">又是春初梦落空,西厢独辨月朦胧。粘天草杂三山翠,隔岸灯深一坞红。</span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">船泊远郊篷受露,燕衔寒玉柳随风。几时削短柯亭笛,相唤何人不应中?</span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><br/></span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">薄酒初倾梦渐空,群山淡隐雾朦胧。墙低助草随时绿,巷窄嫌灯别处红。</span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">戏水鹅惊鱼避棹,打驴鞭赶兔追风。匆匆一别相期久,访遍江南寂寞中。</span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><br/></span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">一纸难书万事空,而今独悟夜朦胧。梦如野草浓还绿,诗比秋灯瘦更红。<span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US"><br/></span>天不绝情人受罪,事非关己耳招风。薄衣掩饰沧桑处,惨淡生涯笑骂中。<span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US"><br/></span></span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">泼墨狂吟漉酒空,秋怀潦草雨朦胧。雀填苦海悲衔碧,枫系孤舟恼落红。<span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US"><br/></span>连夜句裁酸在胆,隔山灯隐淡来风。茫然一眼回头笑,云在天涯聚散中。<span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US"><br/><br/></span>万念千回一喝空,蒲团独坐夜朦胧。楚天有雨江流碧,湘竹无花泪滴红。<span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US"><br/></span>鸟绝关山齐失语,心藏霸气暗屯风。此生还却前生债,另写歌行落拓中。<span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US"><br/><br/></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">坐破蒲团色未空,尘缘错了眼朦胧。鼠吞壁纸菌漂白,灯点铜壶酒兑红。</span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">做梦楼无三面柳,销魂帐有半腮风。我心尤怕金刚杵,偏捣袈裟略皱中。</span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">寄啸山林觉悟空,抬头不语月朦胧。渚边放鹤云留白,檐角飞花雨剩红。<span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US"><br/></span>魔劫初开深到骨,梵音暗杂晚来风。是非只为浮名起,半榻灰尘半扫中。<span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US"><br/><br/></span>别在深秋煮酒空,一杯磊落眼朦胧。事经炭燎翻成黑,衣被梅妆改作红。<span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US"><br/></span>孤馆休悬鱼尾债,匹夫不接马头风。怡然自得诗圆熟,剔罢豪情入集中。<span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US"><br/><br/></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">败寇成王梦已空,禁垣草莽话朦胧。满天苍白心淘黑,一纸雌黄血抹红。<span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US"><br/></span>汉有鬼胎窥国鼎,宋无将种揖民风。可怜多被功名误,赚得龙蛇落彀中。</span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;"><br/></span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/></span>
发表于 2008-11-27 18:50:08 | 显示全部楼层
一韵叠十,难得,多有家具~~
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发表于 2008-11-28 08:34:20 | 显示全部楼层
<p>这组诗不是针对一个人写的,有作者的很多人生感慨在内。</p>
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发表于 2008-11-28 16:55:49 | 显示全部楼层
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">做梦楼无三面柳,销魂帐有半腮风。魔劫初开深到骨,梵音暗杂晚来风。</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">律虽工似少味.对虽稳似多冗.</span></p>
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发表于 2008-12-2 18:44:04 | 显示全部楼层
不少工对。
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发表于 2008-12-3 08:14:11 | 显示全部楼层
<p>才气可见,楼主即便不故用此种风格其诗也佳,些许地方物理上亦觉牵强。</p>
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