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风露中宵

<div id="textstyle_135660" style="ADDING-RIGHT: 0px; MARGIN-TOP: 10px; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; OVERFLOW-X: hidden; WIDTH: 97%; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LINE-HEIGHT: normal; HEIGHT: 200px; WORD-WRAP: break-word;"><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">一</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">枝头红杏本天然，春草好辞千古传。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">顺手拈来非不可，须从妙处辨媸妍。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">注：春草好辞，指谢灵运，池塘生春草句。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">二</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">藻绘徒工诗味无，辨明词性莫心粗。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">欲呼女侠来相问，底事须眉比丈夫？</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">三</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">清辞丽句惹人怜，务得常忧细不捐。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">要做诗中疏凿手，方能幼妇写黄绢。</span></p></div>

浔阳倦客

辩当是辨。

风露中宵

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>浔阳倦客</i>在2008-12-13 17:17:37的发言：</b><br/>辩当是辨。</div><p>谢津兄指正.改之.</p>

天一谷

<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">果真清辞丽句,三首皆喜爱.</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">须从妙处辨媸妍.不知妙处似非最佳,妙处是非已经表明媸妍.则改细处之类呢.因有"于缝隙处见功夫".</span></p>

风露中宵

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>天一谷</i>在2008-12-13 20:19:46的发言：</b><br/><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">果真清辞丽句,三首皆喜爱.</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">须从妙处辨媸妍.不知妙处似非最佳,妙处是非已经表明媸妍.则改细处之类呢.因有"于缝隙处见功夫".</span></p></div><p>谢天兄指正错爱,此句初稿本作,细字.后有人说细字不妥贴,后用改妙.当时也觉一旦用了妙,丑美已经立判.</p><p>再改成细吧,真一字吟安亦不易也.</p>

风露中宵

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>风露中宵</i>在2008-12-13 9:42:18的发言：</b><br/><div id="textstyle_135660" style="ADDING-RIGHT: 0px; MARGIN-TOP: 10px; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; OVERFLOW-X: hidden; WIDTH: 97%; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LINE-HEIGHT: normal; HEIGHT: 200px; WORD-WRAP: break-word;"><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">一</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">枝头红杏本天然，春草好辞千古传。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">顺手拈来非不可，须从细处辨媸妍。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">注：春草好辞，指谢灵运，池塘生春草句。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">二</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">藻绘徒工诗味无，辨明词性莫心粗。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">欲呼女侠来相问，底事须眉比丈夫？</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">三</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">清辞丽句惹人怜，务得常忧细不捐。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">要做诗中疏凿手，方能幼妇写黄绢。</span></p></div><br/></div><p></p>