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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;"><span lang="EN-US">1;</span>读《杜甫诗选》<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>沧江一卧壮心惊<span lang="EN-US">,</span>望断京华故国情<span lang="EN-US">.</span>细柳新蒲描气象<span lang="EN-US">,</span>朱门白骨怨分明<span lang="EN-US">.<br/></span>艰难世事疮痍泪<span lang="EN-US">,</span>慷慨辞章金石声<span lang="EN-US">.</span>彩笔干霄诗史在<span lang="EN-US">,</span>千秋徒作不平鸣<span lang="EN-US">.<br/><br/>2;</span>雨后扶棉<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>一道长虹对落晖<span lang="EN-US">,</span>扶棉农父荷锄归<span lang="EN-US">.</span>相摧风雨应难撼<span lang="EN-US">,</span>争夺银山笑语飞<span lang="EN-US">.&nbsp;<br/><br/>3;</span>海疆重布汉旌旗<span lang="EN-US">(</span>二首<span lang="EN-US">)<br/>&lt;</span>一<span lang="EN-US">&gt;&nbsp;<br/></span>愤激元元血泪收<span lang="EN-US">,</span>终教一雪百年羞<span lang="EN-US">.</span>梦回故国蚕频食<span lang="EN-US">,</span>歌放香江幄运筹<span lang="EN-US">.<br/></span>赫日当中云自散<span lang="EN-US">,</span>群星拱北志方酬<span lang="EN-US">.</span>诗心更共山河壮<span lang="EN-US">,</span>折倒强权世莫俦；<span lang="EN-US"><br/><br/>&lt;</span>二<span lang="EN-US">&gt;<br/></span>海疆重布汉旌旗<span lang="EN-US">,</span>抖擞天威动四夷<span lang="EN-US">.</span>香岛飘香歌盛举<span lang="EN-US">,</span>港人治港见真奇<span lang="EN-US">.<br/></span>恃强碧眼原无赖<span lang="EN-US">,</span>毕竟黄肤未可欺<span lang="EN-US">.</span>特色中华添锦绣<span lang="EN-US">,</span>明珠返国灿何其<span lang="EN-US">.<br/><br/>4;</span>哭妹<span lang="EN-US">(</span>二首<span lang="EN-US">)<br/>&lt;</span>一<span lang="EN-US">&gt;<br/></span>杜鹃啼血不胜情，话到今生泪已倾，飘落桃花初吐蕊，辞根散入雨风声。<span lang="EN-US"><br/><br/>&lt;</span>二<span lang="EN-US">&gt;<br/></span>雁影分飞破梦寒<span lang="EN-US">,</span>明珠强夺太心酸<span lang="EN-US">.</span>初为儿母悲长别<span lang="EN-US">,</span>待哺嗷嗷责未完<span lang="EN-US">.<br/><br/>5;</span>梦亡妹<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>唤兄亲切语尤真<span lang="EN-US">,</span>一觉凄凉更怆神<span lang="EN-US">.</span>骨肉伤残天永隔<span lang="EN-US">,</span>肝肠恸断世何亲<span lang="EN-US">.<br/></span>不胜寒处孤灯寂<span lang="EN-US">,</span>失向来时笑语频<span lang="EN-US">.</span>呼遍山阿传海角<span lang="EN-US">,</span>难招我妹负芳辰<span lang="EN-US">.<br/><br/>6;</span>读《今雁诗草》有<personname wst="on" productid="怀陶">怀陶</personname>教授<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>重阳把卷醉如狂<span lang="EN-US">,</span>一例黄花四野香<span lang="EN-US">.</span>靖节奇情诗共酒<span lang="EN-US">,</span>洪州壮采阁崇王<span lang="EN-US">.<br/></span>吟裁变雅石痕痛<span lang="EN-US">,</span>恳挚传经赣水泱<span lang="EN-US">.</span>又是清风明月夜<span lang="EN-US">,</span>韵赓唐宋锦云张<span lang="EN-US">.<br/><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span><br/>7; </span>哭伯父<span lang="EN-US">(</span>二首<span lang="EN-US">)<br/>&lt;</span>一<span lang="EN-US">&gt;&nbsp; <br/></span>十月飞霜骤暮寒<span lang="EN-US">,</span>北风吹恨上眉端<span lang="EN-US">.</span>灵前哭拜离肠断<span lang="EN-US">,</span>梦里惊回泣血残<span lang="EN-US">.<br/></span>每忆谆言深眷顾<span lang="EN-US">,</span>敢恢先绪继艰难<span lang="EN-US">.</span>竹林哀莫今宵月<span lang="EN-US">,</span>又照家山隔世看<span lang="EN-US">.<br/><br/>&lt;</span>二<span lang="EN-US">&gt;</span>　<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>寒窗凝望夜沉沉<span lang="EN-US">,</span>想念音容刻骨深<span lang="EN-US">.</span>星月迥从天外肃<span lang="EN-US">,</span>歌诗恍若院中吟<span lang="EN-US">.<br/></span>欢狂随侍朝霞灿<span lang="EN-US">,</span>凉透方惊晓露侵<span lang="EN-US">.</span>悚听飞乌啼不已<span lang="EN-US">,</span>趋庭恸煞比儿心<span lang="EN-US">.&nbsp;<br/><br/><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span>8;</span>辛巳春感<span lang="EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <br/></span>坐对东风岁又更<span lang="EN-US">,</span>萱堂尘冷恨无声<span lang="EN-US">.</span>杏花锁梦慈亲笑<span lang="EN-US">,</span>春雨绵愁空泪盈<span lang="EN-US">.</span>垂柳依依轻拂面<span lang="EN-US">,</span>啼鹃切切怨吹笙。何堪陟屺清明近<span lang="EN-US">,</span>输与乌私答寸诚<span lang="EN-US">.</span>　<span lang="EN-US"><br/><br/>9;</span>温州纪游<span lang="EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<br/><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span></span>雨洗碧天清<span lang="EN-US">,</span>温州万象更<span lang="EN-US">.</span>车驰花外路<span lang="EN-US">, </span>人涌海边城<span lang="EN-US">.<br/></span>波阔开胸次<span lang="EN-US">,</span>霞披照眼明<span lang="EN-US">.</span>满腔诗载酒<span lang="EN-US">,</span>一醉画中行<span lang="EN-US">.&nbsp;<br/><br/>10;</span>登石钟山二首<span lang="EN-US"><br/>&lt;</span>一<span lang="EN-US">&gt;&nbsp; <br/></span>久雨困如秋<span lang="EN-US">,</span>销魂作远游<span lang="EN-US">.</span>空怀苏学士<span lang="EN-US">,</span>长啸太平楼<span lang="EN-US">.<br/></span>山碧无尘染<span lang="EN-US">,</span>江清夹浊流<span lang="EN-US">.</span>何时沐新霁<span lang="EN-US">,</span>万里豁吟眸<span lang="EN-US">.<br/><br/>&lt;</span>二<span lang="EN-US">&gt;&nbsp; <br/></span>花落几春秋<span lang="EN-US">,</span>重来纪胜游<span lang="EN-US">.</span>钟鸣馀壮韵<span lang="EN-US">,</span>诗兴动高楼<span lang="EN-US">.<br/></span>桥架千秋业<span lang="EN-US">,</span>江腾万古流<span lang="EN-US">.</span>富民新九景<span lang="EN-US">,</span>云路亮双眸<span lang="EN-US">.<br/><br/>11;</span>挽余正新师<span lang="EN-US">(</span>二首）<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>〈一〉<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>立雪程门晚<span lang="EN-US">,</span>天何遽夺公<span lang="EN-US">.</span>星沉千点雨<span lang="EN-US">,</span>梦断五更风<span lang="EN-US">.<br/></span>侍坐霞光满<span lang="EN-US">,</span>谈诗锦绣丛<span lang="EN-US">.</span>放翁情宛在<span lang="EN-US">,</span>几度夕阳红<span lang="EN-US">.<br/><br/></span>〈二〉<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>本色真君子<span lang="EN-US">,</span>心存大道公<span lang="EN-US">.</span>词章传雅颂<span lang="EN-US">,</span>桃李舞春风<span lang="EN-US">.<br/></span>伏枕鹃声切<span lang="EN-US">,</span>沾巾泪眼蒙<span lang="EN-US">.</span>悲吟遥祭处<span lang="EN-US">,</span>零落杏花红<span lang="EN-US">.&nbsp;<br/><br/>12;</span>夜访<personname wst="on" productid="陈忠平">陈忠平</personname>先生<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>难得西窗剪烛时<span lang="EN-US">,</span>相知恨晚友兼师<span lang="EN-US">.</span>不妨风雨重交困<span lang="EN-US">,</span>未到龙门转自疑<span lang="EN-US">.<br/></span>万壑松涛寒有味<span lang="EN-US">,</span>一江秋水淡相宜<span lang="EN-US">.</span>归途月落尘嚣净<span lang="EN-US">,</span>倍觉灯明逸兴驰<span lang="EN-US">.&nbsp;<br/><br/>13;</span>迎春绝句<span lang="EN-US">(</span>四首<span lang="EN-US">)<br/>&lt;</span>一<span lang="EN-US">&gt;</span>　<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>迎门雪霁春初到<span lang="EN-US">,</span>破晓鸡声杂鸟声<span lang="EN-US">.</span>勃发诗心楼上望<span lang="EN-US">,</span>晴光万里眼中明<span lang="EN-US">.<br/><br/>&lt;</span>二<span lang="EN-US">&gt;</span>　<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>自爱山村岁月长<span lang="EN-US">,</span>山中梅发又清香<span lang="EN-US">.</span>欣添暮雪十分景<span lang="EN-US">,</span>并入诗囊兴欲狂<span lang="EN-US">.<br/><br/>&lt;</span>三<span lang="EN-US">&gt;</span>　<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>书里乾坤日月新<span lang="EN-US">,</span>芸窗论语德为邻<span lang="EN-US">.</span>春风惠我无穷趣<span lang="EN-US">,</span>始抚心痕慰旧贫<span lang="EN-US">.<br/><br/>&lt;</span>四<span lang="EN-US">&gt;<br/></span>手机短信故人诗<span lang="EN-US">,</span>双临喜门酒满卮<span lang="EN-US">.</span>秀句饱餐春意暖<span lang="EN-US">,</span>渐看柳拂碧参差。<span lang="EN-US"><br/><br/>14;</span>挽<personname wst="on" productid="吴毓苏">吴毓苏</personname>老师　　<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>一别成今古<span lang="EN-US">,</span>千声唤不回<span lang="EN-US">.</span>门墙空企望<span lang="EN-US">,</span>风竹紧相摧<span lang="EN-US">.<br/></span>杯酒洒清泪<span lang="EN-US">,</span>随园吊绿苔<span lang="EN-US">.</span>重来聆教处<span lang="EN-US">,</span>云暗共徘徊<span lang="EN-US">.&nbsp;<br/><br/>15;</span>读叶纯一《余晖集》及《续集》感寄<span lang="EN-US"><br/>&lt;</span>一<span lang="EN-US">&gt;</span>　<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>久困蜗居愧坐禅<span lang="EN-US">,</span>论交今始欲忘年<span lang="EN-US">.</span>松梅愈冷饶芳翠<span lang="EN-US">,</span>杨墨曾狂厄圣贤<span lang="EN-US">.<br/></span>得句河清明月夜<span lang="EN-US">,</span>登楼人醉夕阳烟<span lang="EN-US">.</span>争传两卷元真隐<span lang="EN-US">,</span>字字金声响碧天<span lang="EN-US">.<br/><br/>&lt;</span>二<span lang="EN-US">&gt;</span>　<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>饱阅沧桑可悟禅<span lang="EN-US">,</span>劫波渡尽夜如年<span lang="EN-US">.</span>三春好景人非少<span lang="EN-US">,</span>一屋清贫公自贤<span lang="EN-US">.<br/></span>剩有丹心酬党国<span lang="EN-US">,</span>更无丽句乐云烟<span lang="EN-US">.</span>窗前捧读思潮涌<span lang="EN-US">,</span>万丈澜翻接海天<span lang="EN-US">.<br/><br/>&lt;</span>三<span lang="EN-US">&gt;</span>　<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>空山住老不关禅<span lang="EN-US">,</span>笔底风波负壮年<span lang="EN-US">.</span>午梦纵伤文字狱<span lang="EN-US">,</span>家声依旧子孙贤<span lang="EN-US">.<br/></span>曝书舜日无秦火<span lang="EN-US">,</span>散步村郊趁晓烟<span lang="EN-US">.</span>尽付长吟抚胸臆<span lang="EN-US">,</span>牛棚追忆两重天<span lang="EN-US">.<br/><br/>&lt;</span>四<span lang="EN-US">&gt;<br/></span>回首前尘欲问禅，青衫有泪恨年年<span lang="EN-US">.</span>人因仙骨夸英俊<span lang="EN-US">,</span>我愧书灯读圣贤<span lang="EN-US">.<br/></span>把酒良宵空对月<span lang="EN-US">,</span>搜肠瘦语半笼烟<span lang="EN-US">.</span>少陵歌哭千秋重<span lang="EN-US">,</span>不悔渔郎访洞天<span lang="EN-US">.&nbsp;<br/><br/>16;</span>终宵<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>辗转终宵乱绪侵<span lang="EN-US">,</span>相思两地苦难禁<span lang="EN-US">,</span>打工忍别春应老<span lang="EN-US">,</span>留守待归秋已深<span lang="EN-US">.<br/></span>夜冷加班灯影瘦<span lang="EN-US">,</span>枕单寻梦月轮沉<span lang="EN-US">.</span>牵肠千里云遮断<span lang="EN-US">,</span>盼得团圆始放心<span lang="EN-US">.<br/><br/>17;</span>甲申重阳诗会<span lang="EN-US"> (</span>二首<span lang="EN-US">)&nbsp;<br/>&lt;</span>一<span lang="EN-US">&gt;</span>　<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>云飞五彩耀晴空<span lang="EN-US">,</span>眼底湖山四望通<span lang="EN-US">.</span>载酒呼朋花影里<span lang="EN-US">,</span>催诗邀我笑声中<span lang="EN-US">.<br/></span>东篱菊放秋阳艳<span lang="EN-US">,</span>盛世人歌意气同<span lang="EN-US">.</span>更喜归来前辈健<span lang="EN-US">,</span>豪情依旧唱英风<span lang="EN-US">.<br/><br/>&lt;</span>二<span lang="EN-US">&gt;</span>　<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>有负清明卧水隈<span lang="EN-US">,</span>峰回路转现楼台<span lang="EN-US">.</span>半生春梦如烟散<span lang="EN-US">,</span>万里秋光逐雁来<span lang="EN-US">.<br/></span>门映斜晖红欲醉<span lang="EN-US">,</span>窗含新竹绿初回<span lang="EN-US">.</span>香风时送南园橘<span lang="EN-US">,</span>果满枝头笑举杯<span lang="EN-US">.</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;"><p></p></span></p>

云中鸾

有真情在，语少磨砺。

红叶

<p>老乡作品，多涉乡贤，颇多感触。</p><p>燕子MM言之有理呀</p>

楚鱼

<p>一气读完，感不自胜。句内外俱见功夫，亦真诗人。</p>

殊熠在天

拜读。不错。