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发表于 2009-3-21 11:57:41 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">雨罅微晴宜小遊。輕衣快履柳風柔。一行碧影閑過雁,數點白煙慵起鷗。吹浪魚兒網難盡,趁潮艇子棹何悠。最憐野草佔春滿,寸地不容人種愁。</span></span></span></p></span></span></span><br/><br/><br/>
发表于 2009-3-21 16:47:34 | 显示全部楼层
<p>最憐野草佔春滿,寸地不容人種愁。</p><p></p><p>结新,大妙</p>
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发表于 2009-3-21 17:51:38 | 显示全部楼层
<p>同楼上。</p><p></p>
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发表于 2009-3-21 19:33:50 | 显示全部楼层
<p>结确实是出人意表&nbsp; 闲过雁、慵起鷗也喜</p>
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发表于 2009-3-22 13:39:03 | 显示全部楼层
結饒餘想。還是有欲种愁者在。
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发表于 2009-3-23 14:38:51 | 显示全部楼层
中两联删之,则为好诗。
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发表于 2009-3-24 12:16:54 | 显示全部楼层
公還欲讓人遊乎?
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