除夕前夜雷電忽作因念電腦曾遭擊損事心有餘悸斷網後百無聊賴得此長句

一得愚生

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">接春風雨正斜斜，忽有劈窗雷電加。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">失箸男兒空膽色，關心瘦損老梅花。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">因躭詩癖情堪系，故愛熒屏事可嗟。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">一帖縈懷惶坐臥，便知無網不生涯。</span></p>

青青子佩

<p>这么早就听到春雷了,羡慕</p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">一帖縈懷惶坐臥，便知無網不生涯。</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">嘻嘻</span>[em07]</p>

顽少半个

<p>给先生拜个年，祝一切顺利！</p><br/>

清风徐来

<p>除夕闻春雷。难得。</p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">一帖縈懷惶坐臥，便知無網不生涯。</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">“惜时”学习。</span></p><p></p>

瀚海胡杨

<p>拜读了一得兄的诗,我心有同感!</p><p>那天我们这里也是雷雨交加,我也像一得兄一样关了电脑.一得兄的诗,正好写出了我心里的感受!</p><p>真是好诗!!!</p>

剑尘

感觉不太流畅

簡素

<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">一帖縈懷惶坐臥</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">網蟲寫照：））</span></p>