五律 謁濂溪墓限“蓮”字

鄱湖渔歌

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">濂溪留子墓，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">风雨竟千年。石瘦山丰竹，池清</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 0.4pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">水爱莲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; LETTER-SPACING: 0.4pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 0.4pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">端庄名节重，道德礼仪贤。志趣存高远，襟怀自在天。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><br/><br/>

浔阳倦客

子字似乎多余，中二联也多可斟酌处，三起不太解，三联欠工

鄱湖渔歌

<font size="4">墓在<font face="宋体">三起山</font>,<span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma;">濂溪水名,中二联待改.</span></font><br/>

虔青草

<p>子字不多余，中二联确实欠工。</p>

惜梦缘

结意好

午阳

拜读了老师的好律，有气势哦。