踏莎行 题《长春词选》

胖大海

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">踏莎行</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp; </font></span></span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">题《长春词选》</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red;"><p></p></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">原本蛮笺，居然玉椠，君师秦七耶师范？静观险韵俱成诗，文生寒笛驱天暗。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">心若梅花，身犹菡萏，于泥于雪均奇艳。初闻携杵赴清溪，十年磨就龙泉剑。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><p></p></span></p>

殊熠在天

<p>下片较好。</p><p>出泥著雪均奇艳似好些。</p>

浔阳倦客

这种语言风格当是议论诗，不合塞进词里

胖大海

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>殊熠在天</i>在2009-4-28 11:40:48的发言：</b><br/><p>下片较好。</p><p>出泥著雪均奇艳似好些。</p></div><p></p>谢老鼠，问好~

胖大海

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>浔阳倦客</i>在2009-4-28 22:22:48的发言：</b><br/>这种语言风格当是议论诗，不合塞进词里</div><p></p>呵呵~这种人情词，着实不好写，是诗家可能都有体会~~