[原创]风入松 答宛儿 【第一部】

枕石山人

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">风入松</span><font face="Times New Roman"> 答宛儿 </font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">平韵【第一部】</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp; </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">斯人渐瘦倚桥东，听雨滴梧桐。江天暮霭迷鸥鹭，最深处，恰似愁浓。一阁谁人琴起，闻声泪眼朦胧。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp; </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">曾经云水寄飘蓬，南北累孤鸿。容颜悴损霜青鬓，天怜得、乍见春红。只惜春红时短，思来又杳香踪。</span></p>

叶子

这首好于《踏莎行》。

东华人氏

此为变体。窃以为上下片结拍作对偶句为佳。