酸甜苦辣

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;">酸甜苦辣底须争，百味何人作弄成？忍听鸣蝉喧叶底，半年心事寂无声。</p><p>永夜遥遥暑气蒸，新愁旧梦递相仍。将身修到无情谱，检点波澜莫使增。</p><p>长灯短梦总难删，乱绪蒸腾子夜间。多谢清风能惜护，肯吹花气上烟鬟。</p><p></p>到底心情不可论，遥怜江水涨轻痕。隔墙人语空来往，薄影寒愁映一门。<br/>

今是昨非斋

三四是否有点不顺？

风露中宵

<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: arial; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;">忍听鸣蝉喧叶底,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: arial; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;">半生心事寂无声.好象承接有点牵强。不如骆宾王的：“那堪玄鬓影，来对白头吟”来得自然。</span>

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是指三四与一二句承接得不顺。还是指四句与第三句承接得不顺？

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<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: arial; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-family: arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;">永夜遥遥暑气蒸，新愁旧梦递相仍。将身修到无情谱，检点波澜莫使增。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/></span>

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<span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">长灯短梦总难删，乱绪蒸腾子夜间。多谢清风能惜护，肯吹花气上烟</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 0.4pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">鬟。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/></span>

向闲

以为是大刀三，看诗不象。欢迎新朋友！

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<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>向闲</i>在2009-6-20 14:13:12的发言：</b><br/>以为是大刀三，看诗不象。欢迎新朋友！<br/></div><p>问好向闲兄。</p>

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到底心情不可论，遥怜江水涨轻痕。隔墙人语空来往，薄影寒愁映一门。