暮投翠岩禅寺与江右群友临屏同赋

殊熠在天

<p><font color="#f70909" size="3"><strong><br/>斜阳依旧别，敛照下遥隈。<br/>青磬从林出，白云随客来。<br/>山门不关月，松石只侵苔。<br/>谁结跏趺坐？亭亭荫古槐！</strong></font></p><p></p><br/><br/><br/><br/><br/><br/>

心上秋

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;">夜访某寺<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;">戴月担风客，何方是我家？<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;">远钟鸣不已，近水影微斜。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;">烟重知僧在，腹空愁路遮。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;">前行应未远，池内种莲花。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p>

草啸

<p>这个，咋没见到咋胡呢？</p><p>看来，这鼠，来去梅岭之间，已经很小资了了哈。</p>

云雀

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">访某古寺</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">日晚向山</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 'MS Gothic'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'MS Gothic'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'MS Gothic';">行</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">，两三飞鸟过。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">林深香火稀，寺老枯松卧。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">风息动昏灯，钟声催晚课。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">荷池浅且浑，果有莲花座？</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">凑一个仄韵的，也不知道合不合,汗下下</span></p>[em01]

殊熠在天

<p>谢情僧云雀二兄妹的跟赋。</p><p>云雀的仄韵也无不可，只不过叫五律五古的不好定义，甚佳。</p>