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发表于 2009-12-3 16:41:42 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">暗淡烟云化雨丝,襟怀千古有谁知。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">醉来倚就阑干卧,老去还将逝者追。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">李白狂歌天姥别,渊明苦赋菊花诗。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">而今我也吟思动,欲倒三江润笔眉。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p>
发表于 2009-12-3 19:47:44 | 显示全部楼层
<p>笔眉,有没有这个说法啊?</p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-12-4 08:47:01 | 显示全部楼层
<p>笔锋是有的,笔眉纵然有也是它义。故润笔眉当改。</p>
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