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风露中宵

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman" size="3"></font></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3"></font></p></span></p><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3"></font></p><p></p><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3"></font></p><p></p><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3"></font></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">白雪纸间落，绿蚁醉吟眸。鸡虫岁岁争食，底事费权谋。摇碎壶中明月，静听窗前风露，好梦不须求。</span><font face="Times New Roman"><br/></font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">世事东流水，桑海任悠悠。</span><span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3"></font></p></span></p><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3"></font></p><p></p><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3"></font></p><p></p><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3"></font></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">望新岁，思陈迹，索因由。遮莫穷途痛哭，去去又休休。卷地长风万里，破雾轻帆一叶，白浪遏飞舟。<font face="Times New Roman"><br/></font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">叱</span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">起鱼龙舞，伴我作长游。<span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><span lang="EN-US"></span></span></font><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">附原璧：</span><span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">风卷残年去，雪洗亮双眸。人间万象如幻，处处隐机谋。名利水中捞月，富贵花间垂露，何必苦寻求。诸事皆蜗角，杯酒自悠悠。</span><span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3"></font></p></span></p><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3"></font></p><p></p><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3"></font></p><p></p><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3"></font></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">醒残梦，梳思绪，问缘由。看透人情冷暖，莫莫且休休。摘取春花一朵，拾起秋枫一片，折作远行舟。三尺清风剑，沧海任遨游。</span><span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><br/><br/>

向闲

过片发新理三字或可再敲。

云楼月

欣赏 觉原作更浑然些[em04]

风露中宵

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>向闲</i>在2009-12-27 11:23:08的发言：</b><br/>过片发新理三字或可再敲。</div><p>多谢向兄指正。</p>

梦烟霏

自有一份心事。：）也觉三字处不是很稳当。。另原作也是如此。