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她(十首终极版)

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发表于 2009-12-27 12:12:51 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">她是谁容我认真,虹桥一别梦如尘。紫衣钩竹廊扶醉,红叶藏书笔费神。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">心上锁难防色贼,眼中波欲溺情人。殷勤约断天涯路,何以东风不及春?</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">她携小雨约春初,未许同行暂结庐。解梦兼藏新意象,填词合用古情书。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">香焚鬓绿愁翻倍,酒助腮红烛剩余。墙上一痕疏影浅,入裁菱镜总嫌虚。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">她爱瓶梅我爱榴,谐音宛转此心幽。烟迷梦尾地中海,雨响春初山外楼。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">画饼徒劳墙作案,悬琴独赖发为钩。黯然重数归期远,辜负家乡酒半瓯。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">她曾许我共余年,指石为凭誓在先。老隐金鸡湖一角,闲游铁佛寺三边。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">落花可替收官子,偷菜何劳买酒钱?管甚吴歌多腻味,江南自有鹧鸪天。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">她在天涯信未通,危楼独坐雨随风。消愁一碗分春少,刻烛三更得句工。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">纱隔马蹄莲愈白,泪磨鸡血石才红。惘然缝就心头梦,再把金釵锁鬓丛。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">潸然一诺盼相逢,她扫深闺快拨钟。长夜不眠茶选淡,满身皆乏药煎浓。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">灯熏纸脆无关蠹,案垒峰高有待松。闲立小窗星暗数,卷帘心事漏重重。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">十三弦滑为谁弹?她与梅花共小寒。牛耳受风频洗垢,麝脐凝雪独凭栏。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">通幽径觅诗踪绝,唱晚舟留夜火酸。未断余音先断意,原来寂寞本无端。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">相思最怕下眉头,她本多情我少谋。删稿苦于风读厌,学筝空为夜怀幽。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">八年南住催无果,一水东流送莫愁。歧路断难分故土,谁家燕子入重楼?</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">相怜百合错栽盆,她恼风华损酒樽。湖畔有房宜做爱,指间无钻怎成婚?</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">诗题白露封情榜,梦解红绳遁佛门。坐破蒲团难觉悟,单衣半揭是伤痕。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">明知一别各炎凉,她不裁诗赠八行。春已到头偏种玉,梦难收尾尚分香。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">斗茶成趣添眉绿,修甲如愁剪韭黄。往事翻然皆半悔,当年醉卧属荒唐。</span></p><p><br/></p>

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发表于 2009-12-27 20:13:27 | 显示全部楼层
<p>春已到头偏种玉,梦难收尾尚分香。[em17][em17]先生一串玉可送她珍藏 我等亦来分香[em01][em23][em23][em23]</p><p>欣赏学习</p>[em27]
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发表于 2009-12-27 20:34:35 | 显示全部楼层
<p>我回复了,怎不见?</p><p>沪上别后,时切萦思,今睹锦篇,大慰饥渴。</p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-12-27 20:55:38 | 显示全部楼层
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>仰斋</i>在2009-12-27 20:34:35的发言:</b><br/><p>我回复了,怎不见?</p><p>沪上别后,时切萦思,今睹锦篇,大慰饥渴。</p></div><p>问好仰老!也代她问好。上次一别,她去了美国,可能近期不会回来了。</p><p>网上赏读仰老,风采遇见硬朗,佩服!</p><p>后学瞎忙了一年,也只是最近有点空闲。唉,人在江湖身不由己,一叹!</p><p>这不刚才接到她电话,非要偶把那组《家》写满十首,偶本来想写五首就混过去了,可还不行。烦恼呀</p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-12-27 21:01:33 | 显示全部楼层
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>云楼月</i>在2009-12-27 20:13:27的发言:</b><br/><p>春已到头偏种玉,梦难收尾尚分香。[em17][em17]先生一串玉可送她珍藏 我等亦来分香[em01][em23][em23][em23]</p><p>欣赏学习</p>[em27]</div><p>谢谢云兄! 这种玉的典故,给偶拆成这样,也确是想种好后能送她滴,可惜隔太远,送到也不合算啦。:):)</p>
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发表于 2009-12-27 22:54:14 | 显示全部楼层
<p>一组精品,味儿浓,流畅。</p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;">她是谁容,什么意思,没看懂。</span></p>
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发表于 2009-12-28 08:42:04 | 显示全部楼层
艳羡!
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-12-28 11:24:59 | 显示全部楼层
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>寒砚</i>在2009-12-27 22:54:14的发言:</b><br/><p>一组精品,味儿浓,流畅。</p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;">她是谁容,什么意思,没看懂。</span></p></div><p>问好寒砚。她是谁容我认真------这句是三四句式,应断成“她是谁?容我认真”。这样意思就明了。</p>
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发表于 2009-12-31 23:33:43 | 显示全部楼层
好诗,学习了,

好漂亮的MM,欣赏了
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