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发表于 2007-5-4 22:21:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-ascii-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4">一别经年各自殊,</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-ascii-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4">转蓬流落满江湖。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-ascii-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4">樽中犹觉真情在,</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-ascii-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4">话里方知稚气无。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-ascii-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4">微醉也,笑相扶,</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-ascii-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4">也拿合影说当初。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-ascii-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4">沧桑最是额前发,</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-ascii-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4">脱到如今不用梳。</font></span></p>
发表于 2007-5-4 22:23:59 | 显示全部楼层
下片詼諧 亦有情致
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发表于 2007-5-5 12:10:54 | 显示全部楼层
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-ascii-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4">樽中犹觉真情在,</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-ascii-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4">话里方知稚气无。<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-ascii-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4">沧桑最是额前发,</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-ascii-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4">脱到如今不用梳。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-ascii-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312"></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-ascii-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312">--上两句颇佳,同感.</font></span></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-ascii-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4">沧桑最是额前发,</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-ascii-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4">脱到如今不用梳。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-ascii-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312"></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-ascii-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312">--上两句颇佳,同感.</font></span></p>
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发表于 2007-5-5 15:10:40 | 显示全部楼层
这首太好!上片也太有趣味,试想没有上片之铺,何来下片之妙,我独喜四句,真过来人语!
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发表于 2007-5-7 09:58:45 | 显示全部楼层
<p>词见性情!</p><p>哈,没想到小白也来此一游了,幸会幸会[em01]</p>
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