菩萨蛮 次叶子韵

鄱湖渔歌

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">晚来风骤空惆怅，心波更比江波漾。堤柳黯然垂，时闻杜宇啼。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">乍惊帘外雨，梦醒人离去。子夜月犹斜，幽钟浮梵家。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">附原作</span></p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">菩萨蛮</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp; </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">叶子</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">画眉初罢添惆怅，红楼宴冷离歌漾。残月又西垂，空山惊鸟啼。</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">梦中梅子雨，一刹春归去。酒外柳丝斜，天涯何处家。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"></p></span><br/><br/>

东华人氏

<p>渔歌此阕不简单!</p>

鄱湖渔歌

<p>多谢东华兄,惭愧!</p>

浔阳倦客

<p>同意东华。渔歌看来鼓捣这个女子擅长的东东比鼓捣偶们爷们擅长的东东要好。</p><p>鼓掌～～～</p>

红叶

<p><font size="5">嘿嘿。</font></p>

虔青草

欣赏渔歌兄好词！

鄱湖渔歌

<p>多谢诸兄鼓励</p>

卷葹

<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">晚来风骤空惆怅，心波更比江波漾——</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">只此一起，便有沉郁顿挫之潜气内转，非泛泛伤春也。</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">渔歌兄一首比一首精采！</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">还是得挑点骨头：禅与梵重复。</span></p>

一得愚生

<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">咋　这个字未解</span>

卷葹

乍之误吧？