青衫兄来昌，与江右诸友聚宴约歌韵《浣溪沙》

鄱湖渔歌

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">昨日裁诗入眼波，</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">玉华宴罢放笙歌。</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">章门霭霭别离多。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">因甚酒频炊黍梦，</span><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">如何窗隔九天河。</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">英雄迟暮泣铜驼。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p>

抱月斋

<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;">英雄暮鼓泣铜驼。</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;">好！</span></p>

梅云

<font size="4"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">“因甚酒频炊黍梦”，有梦窗</span>“炊黍梦、光阴渐老,汀洲烟箬”、“念秦楼、也拟人归,应剪昌蒲自酌”之悲慨；“<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">如何窗隔九天河”，则蕴义山“星沉海底当窗见,雨过河源隔座看”及“回望高城落晓河，长亭窗户压微波”之怅惘，惟觉对仗稍欠工稳尔。</span></font>

鄱湖渔歌

多谢抱月兄,熊社点评

浔阳倦客

<p>渔歌也放电（碘）了</p><p>章台路似乎指情人走的路</p>

鄱湖渔歌

章台借指柳呀

向闲

章台柳，章台柳，昔日青青今在否。

卷葹

<p>章台乃长安街名，与章台柳一样是特指，不如用“章门”吧。</p><p>暮鼓也不太好解。</p>

一得愚生

何不直用“迟暮”

鄱湖渔歌

恩,谢段老师和一得兄,改过.