思佳客·听秋

卷葹

<font size="5"><font face="楷体_GB2312"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 28.1pt; TEXT-INDENT: -28.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: -2.0;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">思佳客·听秋<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 21pt; TEXT-INDENT: -21pt; mso-char-indent-count: -2.0;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font size="4">篱角秋花故故红，频移昼影上墙东。摊书有味拈奇字，枕手无眠数阵鸿。<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 21pt; TEXT-INDENT: -21pt; mso-char-indent-count: -2.0;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"></span></span><font size="4">虫呓语，夜回风，碎声都入小楼中。谁能割取鲛人练，为拭霜天奏响桐。<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></span></font></span></b><font size="4">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<br/></font></p></span></span></font></font><br/><br/><br/><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font size="4">中元前一日红谷滩头<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p><font face="楷体_GB2312"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font size="4">处暑才三夜，滩沙气尚温。波推莲盏烛，风剪纸衣魂。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p><font face="楷体_GB2312"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font size="4">野俗由来远，悲心莫与论。未知方外地，也拟坐黄昏。</font></span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"></span></b></p><p></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p></p><br/><br/><br/><br/><br/><br/>

一得愚生

<p>词下片尤有味。</p><p><font size="4"><strong>波推莲盏烛，风剪纸衣魂。 </strong></font><font size="3">此风俗多不存，中元夜惟烧纸钱而已。</font><font size="4"><br/></font></p>

维扬

<p><strong><font size="4">谁能割取鲛人练，为拭霜天奏响桐。</font></strong></p><p><strong><font size="4">欣赏了。</font></strong></p>

湘东诗苑

句句有千钓力,惯性却不太.

浔阳倦客

<p>卷师，烛推差可，魂能剪乎？^_^</p>

卷葹

<p>是呵，水中的纸烛船由波所推，焚烧的纸衣之烟，不是由风所剪碎么？</p><p>或许用“痕”字更妥？难言也。第七句稍改。</p>

梅云

<p>两诗并佳,读罢歆慕.拙作一首附骥:</p><p>中元节感赋</p><p>幡影幢幢鬼面燃,三牲祭向净坛前.</p><p>不知尘海茫茫劫,谁为苍生解倒悬?</p><p>注:梵语盂兰,华言倒悬.</p>

水击三千

<strong><font size="4">波推莲盏烛，风剪纸衣魂。此俗闽地多有。我们这有纸衣无河灯，，</font></strong>

鄱湖渔歌

<p>更喜欢词!!</p>

向闲

二月春风似剪刀。以剪喻风，无不可；喻碎纸灰尤形象。