炉边闲咏(续二）

仰斋

<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">分柑</span><span style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">纤手呈嘉橘，红光似酒酣。不言曾共苦，只欲永分甘。</span><span style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">涸辙泥成蜜，恩霖水溢潭。采归鲜果至，喜色又盈篮。</span><span style="mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">鲜枣</span><span style="mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">忆昔女媭家，繁枝缀小花。须臾见青果，胡乱点朱砂。</span><span style="mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">遥念驾云鹤，空悲泼墨鸦。安期无复在，谁赐巨如瓜。</span><span style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"></span><span style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"></span><span style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"></font></span><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p>

颖庐

更爱<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-ansi-language: zh-cn;">鲜枣一首,细物见深情。希望亲人长寿，人同此心，却能以不经意笔墨道出。举重若轻，学习了。</span><span style="mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: zh-cn;">
                <p>分柑“涸辙”一联费解。</p></span>

草啸

学习。

一得愚生

同段姐 <br/>其一前半借題妙 亦喜

仰斋

<p>谢颖庐、草啸和一得兄。</p><p>分柑实是写拙荆。五句承三句之曾共苦，六句承四句之永分甘。题为分柑，非只咏柑，晦涩或由于此。待细思之。现只稍改尾联。鲜枣实思亡姐。驾鹤指仙逝。此处易起歧义。所谓诗无达诂也。</p>

向闲

第一首涸辙，盖言夫妻共患难。同甘易，共苦却难。第二首女<font face="宋体">媭，借屈平意，点明是怀姐。二首着笔都甚有新意，学习！</font>

仰斋

谢向闲兄。

皎月

<p>问候仰老。</p><p>二首意境均见深邃</p>

仰斋

谢皎月

湘东诗苑

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>向闲</i>在2008-1-4 15:54:31的发言：</b><br/>第一首涸辙，盖言夫妻共患难。同甘易，共苦却难。第二首女<font face="宋体">媭，借屈平意，点明是怀姐。二首着笔都甚有新意，学习！</font><br/></div><p></p>学习.