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湘东诗苑

<p></p><p>半城山色碧涟沦，夏木阴阴一客身。衙冷每逃迎迓苦，市深偏爱贩酤真。</p><p>耽眠谁复文章罪，病酒翻成秦汉民，堆案牍书似山厚，随它拖沓作闲人。</p><p></p>

浔阳倦客

<p>题目当是整饬吧</p><p>7句格律似应调</p>

向闲

<p>山字重出。</p>

湘东诗苑

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>浔阳倦客</i>在2008-6-24 22:15:03的发言：</b><br/><p>题目当是整饬吧</p><p>7句格律似应调</p></div><p></p><p>倦兄数次问及这个问题,</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">庵中杂书(陆游)</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p><p></p><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">蒲龛坐久暖如春，纸被无声白似云。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font color="#f73809"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font color="#f73809">除却放生并施药</font></span>，</font>更无一事累天君。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">庵中晨起书触目(陆游)</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p><p></p><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">初归誓墓老乡邦，手结茆茨近小江。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">北渚露沾行药屐，东厢日射勘书窗。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">孤忠自信丹心折，万事空成雪鬓霜。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font color="#ff0000">长媿宗人白崖老，</font>赠行期我鹿门庞。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">这两句都是拗句.仄仄平平平仄仄,换成了,仄仄平平仄平仄.<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font color="#f73809">除却放生并施药,更是出现出句起首三字三仄.王力先生说"宋人流行将这种特殊句式放到尾联"</font></span></span></p><br/>

湘东诗苑

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>向闲</i>在2008-6-25 7:56:05的发言：</b><br/><p>山字重出。</p></div><p>待我想想.</p>

江湖小李

衙冷每逃迎迓苦，市深偏爱贩酤真——这一联有真意！

浔阳倦客

平平平仄仄的句子，后三字如果作仄平仄，则第一字当平。一般如是吧。当然，对兄本不应提这个问题。平仄毕竟是初学者的事。

一得愚生

堆案牍书似山厚 此類句型 七言第三字必用平聲 前人偶有違者 五言第一字則多不拘 <br/>此句不夠凝練 宜再酌

浔阳倦客

<p>七言五言是一样的</p><p>仍怜故乡水</p><p>因思杜棱梦</p><p>无为在歧路</p>

红叶

<p>昔闻洞庭水&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>