偶感

簡素

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 19.5pt;"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">其一</span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 19.5pt;"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">碧天明如洗，何處著雲字。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><p></p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 19.5pt;"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">美人天一方，相思隔寒水。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><p></p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 19.5pt;"><font size="4"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">枯</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">桐</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;">葉似花</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">，風吹懸鈴子。</span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 19.5pt;"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><p></p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 19.5pt;"><font size="4"><chsdate wst="on" year="2007" month="2" day="4" islunardate="False" isrocdate="False"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"></span></chsdate></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 19.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">其二</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 19.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">街燈炫霓虹，圓月皎如雪。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 19.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">燈月兩分明，人天各相悅。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 19.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana;"><font size="4">忽念九原風，一地碎光屑。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p>

东华人氏

是为古风体吧！

簡素

嗯，是想寫成古風的：）

红叶

感觉味不错，

卷葹

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 19.5pt;"><font size="4"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: verdana;">枯</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-FAMILY: pmingliu; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: verdana; mso-fareast-language: zh-tw;">桐</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: verdana;">葉似花</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-FAMILY: pmingliu; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: verdana; mso-fareast-language: zh-tw;">，風吹懸鈴子——意象很美。</span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 19.5pt;"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-FAMILY: pmingliu; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: verdana; mso-fareast-language: zh-tw;">更爱第一首。</span></font></p>

簡素

多謝先生喜歡，我自己也更愛其一：）

鄱湖渔歌

同感

菜人

诗中原有三韵小律一体。

簡素

<p>谢菜人君，原不知还有三韵小律，以后要找来看看。</p><p>谢天堂君雅赏。</p>

皎月

喜欢这种空灵