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发表于 2008-10-27 22:04:39 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">即景兴怀<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></b></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">露湿襟罗带,霞光天际红。白云来故里,寒鹊噪林中。<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">不尽逡巡意,都随迢递风。羁身在尘鞅,归梦总成空。<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></p>



<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">夜读<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></b></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">夜读千年史,兴亡一册中。交攻连水火,代谢几豪雄。<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">霸业谁能久,甘棠望已空。但怜黎庶苦,歌哭总无穷。<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></p>



<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">别怀<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></b></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">向晚南塘路,西风吹断桥。天低云暗淡,雁去柳飘萧。<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">沉醉浑难解,郁怀曾未消。人生离别意,惆怅到今宵。<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></p>



<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">夜坐遣怀<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></b></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">万籁初沉寂,西风吹夜凉。当窗竹影淡,试水茗瓯香。<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">本爱陶然趣,何堪终日忙。浮生不称意,空念岁华荒。<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"></span></b><b><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">闻水蛰二师并燕师伯夜别庐山赴粤有寄<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></b></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">不尽清游兴,宁辞鞍马遥。匡庐一为别,粤水更相招。<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">劳梦披星月,飞心逐浪潮。南天接太古,或可听箫韶。<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"></span></b><b><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">孤夜<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></b></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">星沉云迹渺,木叶颤秋声。残酒酬孤抱,冷风吹别情。<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">未知天远近,已惯月阴晴。纵有高山意,谁将绿绮横。<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"></span></b><b><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">向晚山游兼寄水师<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></b></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">步</span><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 宋体;">屟</span><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">枫林晚,开襟涤俗埃。鸟栖山愈静,风畅菊初开。<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">且向峰前醉,何当月下回。酣然北窗卧,胸底有蓬莱。<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"></span></b><b><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">向晚山游之二<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></b></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">孤峰斜鹤影,飞瀑下前川。烟湿松阴厚<span lang="EN-US">,</span>云浮翠嶂悬。<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">忽闻钟送晚,回望塔摩天。直欲听禅去,结庐灵刹边。<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></p><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"></span></b><b><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">自</span></b><b><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 宋体;">況<span lang="EN-US"><span>&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160; </span><op></op></span></span></b>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">未了断肠句,梦中犹苦吟。踌躇方出口,憔悴已惊心。<span lang="EN-US"><op></op></span></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">千古情难尽,一窗风不禁。浮生命多劫,牢落迹升沉。<span lang="EN-US"><span>&#160; </span><op></op></span></span></p>
发表于 2008-10-27 22:41:52 | 显示全部楼层
欣赏叶子佳作,更喜2,4
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发表于 2008-10-28 08:33:37 | 显示全部楼层
再欣赏一遍,叶子如此用功,怎么得了啊。
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-10-29 00:49:10 | 显示全部楼层
谢姣月摘诗,问好~<br/>雨如兄过奖,大汗中,纯属练笔,勤奋或许有点,但"得了"对俺来说是天方夜谈~<br/>
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发表于 2008-10-29 09:03:39 | 显示全部楼层
问好叶子!更欣赏<span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_;"><strong>即景兴怀和<b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_;">向晚山游之二<span lang="EN-US"><op></op><op></op></span></span></b><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_;"></span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_;"></span></b><op></op><op></op></p></strong></span>
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-10-30 10:38:19 | 显示全部楼层
问好东华兄,更谢华兄能有所喜欢~[em04]
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发表于 2008-10-30 15:24:32 | 显示全部楼层
名师出高徒,可畏也。
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发表于 2008-10-31 15:06:56 | 显示全部楼层
欣赏叶子好诗!
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发表于 2008-10-31 20:59:07 | 显示全部楼层
都好,问叶子姐姐好,真的都很好啊!
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-11-1 22:56:43 | 显示全部楼层
向闲兄过奖了,路还很遥远~~
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