江城子 江右諸子雅聚席間分韻咏梅湖景區分得蓉字

鄱湖渔歌

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"></span></p><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">清池疏柳慧門風。水朦胧，断芙蓉。残雲叠翠，青譜隐仙蹤。哭笑癫狂真俊士，消块礨，刺蒼穹。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp; </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">年來諸事總成空。歎寒冬，悵飄篷。方知鬢白，歲月去匆匆。</span><span style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                        </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">梦裏乾坤猶有梦，愁酌酒，聽禪鐘。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p>

东华人氏

渔歌兄填词更有长进！

向闲

<font face="宋体">醉禪鐘是何意。</font>

鄱湖渔歌

<font face="宋体">醉聽禪鐘</font>&nbsp; 不知可否,謝東華向兄!!

颖庐

直接說“聽禪鐘”如何？聽，平仄二讀。

鄱湖渔歌

謝過段老師

颖庐

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">江右即席得雪字<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font size="5">濁世多涼熱，自裹千千結。仰彼席上酒，沃此心頭雪。</font></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font size="5">偶聚或深憶，百年秖一瞥。出門夜色迥，醉與風相別。</font></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">小註：一昨小宴，劍塵兄拈太白《古風·寶劍》分韻，“寶劍雙蛟龍，雪花照芙蓉。精光射天地，雷騰不可衝……”予得雪字，當下得前四句，歸來補足消繳。</span></p>

向闲

段师好诗！

惜梦缘

<p>悄悄进来学习</p>

剑尘

渔歌兄瓷器确实越烧越好!