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发表于 2009-2-24 12:26:54 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">赋得莫问长江水浅深</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">一</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">莫问长江水浅深,岸边花木已成林。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">轮机不惧风波急,铁坝无忧鼠蚁侵。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">明月东升铺锦绣,微云半落绕岩岑。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">鸣鸠每应天晴雨,百尺楼头啭丽音。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">二</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">萦怀最是故园心,莫问长江水浅深。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">九派烟横腾野马,五湖云漫驻青禽。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">犹存古道民风朴,初入名山客意忱。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">更得神龙施雨露,隔窗总听涨潮音。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span><br/></font></font></font></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">三</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">蓦地升空落几寻,沙鸥不惧晓烟侵。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">但看高峡云青白,莫问长江水浅深。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">百战干戈沉瀚海,千年楼塔立花林。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">红羊劫后河山老,梦里犹悬故国心。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">四</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">街灯隐约众星沉,汽笛声来隔暮阴。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">古井暗翻城外浪,小姑轻捣渡头砧。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">能量大地土宽厚,莫问长江水浅深。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">望里南山真可隐,松风几处奏鸣琴。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#0000ff" size="4">五</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#0000ff" size="4">学府堂前读教箴,千年香火旺双林。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#0000ff" size="4">秋花对酒陶公节,洁蕊浮塘茂叔心。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#0000ff" size="4">云雨飘来峰隐迹,天风拂过树鸣琴。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#0000ff" size="4">畅游就向潮头立,莫问长江水浅深。</font></span>
发表于 2009-2-24 13:01:11 | 显示全部楼层
<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-ascii-font-family:'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;;"><font color="#0000ff" size="4">云雨飘来峰隐迹,天风拂过树鸣琴。很喜欢这一联。第一首中二联平头,或可变化。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'mso-fareast-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;;"><br/></span>
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发表于 2009-2-25 14:10:51 | 显示全部楼层
老倦&nbsp; 这一处女滚打的还行
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发表于 2009-2-25 23:21:58 | 显示全部楼层
各有好句,老倦也大大的厉害,只是这题目怎恁不顺眼?[em07]
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-2-26 12:18:30 | 显示全部楼层
<p>谢向兄摘句赏</p><p>谢渔歌鼓励</p><p>谢叶子mm称赞。mm所不顺眼者,处女也,可俺喜欢哈。别人第一篇作品可称为处女作,俺第一次打滚怎么不能算处女滚呢</p>
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发表于 2009-2-26 12:22:19 | 显示全部楼层
奥,原来如此:)俺写这么多了,可没打过一个滚,自知无那份才滚出象样东西,也就免滚了~`
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发表于 2009-2-26 18:14:25 | 显示全部楼层
<p>恭喜浔阳先生隆重成人.</p><p>原来我至今仍为处子身,于今日诗词国中能有几,甚可骄人一件事.</p><p></p><p><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">街灯隐约众星沉,汽笛声来隔暮阴。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="4">古井暗翻城外浪,小姑轻捣渡头砧。</font></p><p><span lang="EN-US">与"古驿滩声汩汩流"同趣.欣赏这两句.</span></p><br/>
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发表于 2009-2-27 09:47:38 | 显示全部楼层
<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-ascii-font-family:'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><font color="#0000ff" size="4">畅游就向潮头立,莫问长江水浅深。真可谓各有所长了!</font></span>
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发表于 2009-2-27 12:46:14 | 显示全部楼层
欣赏!
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发表于 2009-2-27 13:53:12 | 显示全部楼层
<p><font color="#0000ff" size="4">九派烟横腾野马,五湖云漫驻青禽。</font><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#0000ff" size="4">古井暗翻城外浪,小姑轻捣渡头砧。</font></span><span lang="EN-US"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-ascii-font-family:'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;;"><font color="#0000ff" size="4">云雨飘来峰隐迹,天风拂过树鸣琴。--------均是好句,学习呢。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;mso-fareast-font-family:宋体;;"><br/></span><br/></span></span></p>
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