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发表于 2009-11-16 17:03:12 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 71.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.46;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">送爽金风雅兴牵,洞庭湖畔久流连。</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><p></p></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 71.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.46;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">渔帆隐隐红霞里,鸥鸟翩翩白浪间。</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><p></p></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 71.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.46;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">飞雪芦花思帝子,飘香桂树约婵娟。</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><p></p></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 71.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.46;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">无须仙鹤凌空上,早把诗情洒满天。</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><p></p></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><br/><br/>
发表于 2009-11-16 17:10:08 | 显示全部楼层
欢迎!!
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发表于 2009-11-16 17:50:18 | 显示全部楼层
欢迎!“七律”的字样我已代为删除。呵呵!
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发表于 2009-11-16 18:42:36 | 显示全部楼层
欢迎新朋友!
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发表于 2009-11-16 23:39:39 | 显示全部楼层
尾联稍嫌落刘梦得套。
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-11-17 15:07:13 | 显示全部楼层
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>鄱湖渔歌</i>在2009-11-16 17:10:08的发言:</b><br/>欢迎!!</div><p><font size="5">谢谢胡老师!请多指导!问好!</font></p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-11-17 15:08:19 | 显示全部楼层
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>今是昨非斋</i>在2009-11-16 17:50:18的发言:</b><br/>欢迎!“七律”的字样我已代为删除。呵呵!</div><p><font size="5"><strong>谢谢黄老师!请多关照!问好!</strong></font></p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-11-17 15:10:04 | 显示全部楼层
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>草啸</i>在2009-11-16 18:42:36的发言:</b><br/>欢迎新朋友!</div><p><font size="5">谢谢草啸朋友!问好!请多帮助!</font></p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-11-17 15:12:25 | 显示全部楼层
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>向闲</i>在2009-11-16 23:39:39的发言:</b><br/>尾联稍嫌落刘梦得套。</div><p><font size="5">谢谢向闲斑竹!是化用了一下。可以吗?请指导!</font></p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-11-20 13:10:11 | 显示全部楼层
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 71.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.46;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font size="4">我修改如下,请各位指点。谢谢!</font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 71.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.46;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 71.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.46;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 71.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.46;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 71.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.46;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 71.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.46;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 71.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.46;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">送爽金风雅兴牵,洞庭湖畔久流连。</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><p></p></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 71.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.46;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">渔帆隐隐烟波里,鸥鸟翩翩水浪间。</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><p></p></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 71.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.46;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">飞雪芦花思帝子,飘香桂树约婵娟。</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><p></p></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 71.65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.46;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">无需仙鹤排云上,早把诗情洒满天。</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><p></p></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><br/><br/>
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