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皎月

<p>谢谢大家惠顾拙作。</p><p>深谢仰老细为惠评，愧受精思一词。先生所指趋庭与无稽兄之过庭乃同属趋而过庭一典也，自觉字非义同。但细查过庭却有二义。1.指承受父训或径指父训。2.以喻长辈的教训。实不知这样用是否妥帖？望先生再释疑。</p><p>剑尘兄与叶子谬奖了。</p><p>问好华仔，东华，子佩，红叶，鄱湖。</p><p>谢无稽兄建议。若不妥，当接纳。</p>

仰斋

<p>皎月所说第二义，不知是何根据，有何用例？若李商隐《献杜仆射相公》诗：“过庭多令子。”则仍是指承受父训。未闻有第二义。以后如有疑义，应拿出根据，以免答问者费时查考。</p>

皎月

<p>仰老庀材宏富，深谢先生为后学细考，给先生敬茶了！</p><p>皎月查《后汉书·党锢传·李膺》，荀爽致李膺书曰：“久废过庭，不闻善诱。”盖尊敬其师李膺有如父了。 杜牧《寄宣州郑谏议》：“再拜宜为丈人行，过庭交分有无同。”也是尊长辈为丈人行，用了过庭的典。<br/></p>[em27]

向闲

诗中绮语焚难尽，杯底余哀罢不能。也喜这一联。个人觉得第一首太雕琢。<br/>

一得愚生

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">白居易</span><font face="Times New Roman"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;</font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">【和杨郎中贺杨仆射致仕后杨侍郎门生合宴席上作】</span><font face="Times New Roman"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">业重关西继大名，恩深阙下遂高情。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">祥鳣降伴<font color="#d52b2b">趋庭</font>鲤，贺燕飞和出谷莺。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">范蠡舟中无子弟，疏家席上欠门生。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">可怜玉树连桃李，从古无如此会荣。</span><font face="Times New Roman"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;</font><span lang="EN-US"><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">王维</span><font face="Times New Roman"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;</font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">【故太子太师徐公挽歌四首】</span><font face="Times New Roman"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">旧里<font color="#bb4444">趋庭</font>日，新年置酒辰。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">闻诗鸾渚客，献赋凤楼人。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">北首辞明主，东堂哭大臣。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">犹思御朱辂，不惜污车茵。<br/><br/>窃以为以上两首用法与小月同</span></p>