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梅云

謝无稽与城谿兄！城谿兄次和周退老二词，当代转呈。一周为词111首，才思可谓敏捷！

梅云

<font size="4">深佩城谿兄之勤奋与浩然之气！风格不同正显示吟苑生机，倘千人一面，万口同声，岂不单调？兄云“我有自家风格,与你们诸位迥然不同”，实则“我们诸位”风格似亦不尽相同也！兄又云“无论多少人漠视过我,甚至至今仍存某些误解”，然就我所知，江右诸君对吾兄均甚友好，“漠视”云云，恐系“误解”乎？兄之诗词有自家面目，足可在“中华诗词联界”占“一席之地”之地也！</font>

煙雲了了

古人云物以类聚，人以群分，想来诗亦如此吧，若能时时见人之长而学之，见已之短而舍之，则不证圆融亦得圆融矣。同未必不好，因同中有异，知有益已者可学，异未必不合，因异中有同，知有同契者可许，是故古之诗家诗风迥异而能同气相求者多矣。诗风相近而言交默契者亦多矣，何须为异同区区之论而费词耶？本不欲露面，见二先生论诗风之异同，引我之慨，不惴冒昧，姑妄言之，了了无知之论，乞先生莫罪。

梅云

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">见城谿与了了二兄论诗风之异同，启我良深，不禁忆及唐人魏徵之语，录之于下：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">然彼此好尚，互有<a name="baidusnap2"></a>异同：江左宫商发越，贵于清绮；河朔词义贞刚，重乎气质。气质则理胜其词，清绮则文过其意。理深者便于时用，文华者宜于咏歌。此其南北词人得失之大较也。若能掇彼清音，简兹累居，各去其短，合其两长，则文质彬彬，尽善尽美矣。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">”</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">惟此处不关南北，仅涉性情耳。城谿先生当是剑邑故交刘兄一汉乎？数载暌违，然停云落月之思，无时或已也！</span></p>

和轩

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">浣溪纱</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">奉题安亭草阁填词图敬次石窗词宗韵</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">百岁词心谱作图。翛然尘境养闲疏。两窗花影护蓬庐。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">袖拂灵风收夜雨，帘开古月淡秋湖。灯痕红到梦边无？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">萧散真成玉局翁。淡拖云意写从容。安禅岂必效壶公。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">花下已无追梦蝶，箧中犹有蠹书虫。念来一一感春风。</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><br/><br/><br/>

剑尘

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>和轩</i>在2009-5-24 10:06:48的发言：</b><br/><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">浣溪纱</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">奉题安亭草阁填词图敬次石窗词宗韵</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">百岁词心谱作图。翛然尘境养闲疏。两窗花影护蓬庐。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">袖拂灵风收夜雨，帘开古月淡秋湖。灯痕红到梦边无？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">萧散真成玉局翁。淡拖云意写从容。安禅岂必效壶公。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">花下已无追梦蝶，箧中犹有蠹书虫。念来一一感春风。</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><br/><br/><br/><br/></div><p>和轩兄好词！虽是奉题周退老填词图，亦可见自家胸襟也。学习！</p>

红叶

<p>诸家风范，一一拜读！</p><p>老剑此评甚合和轩作意，他该偷着乐了。</p>

一得愚生

<font face="Arial" size="3"><p><font style="FONT-SIZE: 22px;">檢點詞心歸釣圖。清溪自與俗流疏。東門瓜地接琴廬。&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 閑雨閑煙閑筆墨，一丘一壑一江湖。萬千氣象入虛無。<br/></font><font style="FONT-SIZE: 22px;">名士紛紛退作翁。承平謾道世難容。南山荒穢笑陶公。&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 舉目青天看舞鶴，摒心素夜聽吟蟲。長江波影石窗風。</font><br/></p></font><br/><br/><br/>

和轩

<p>谢剑尘兄。兄眼如炬，弟未曾谒见退翁，然蛰师之命不敢违，只好自写自话了，至于胸襟云云，却不敢当：）</p><p>红叶这厮可恶：）</p><p>拜读一得先生好作：）</p><p>拙作结句已改为“念来一一感春风”，然主贴未改，不好意思一再麻烦梅云先生了，哪位版主代改一下，奉茶拜谢：）</p>

梅云

<font size="4">和轩、城谿、一得三兄和作均佳，已录于主帖内，以光篇幅，并拟打印寄呈周退老也。</font>