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【临江仙】

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发表于 2007-3-27 06:54:02 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;"><font size="4">次江南雨君正月梅花韵<br/></font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><br/><br/></span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;"><font size="4">【临江仙】正月梅花</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><br/><br/></span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;"><font size="4">若允甜言听不老,听寒一握东风。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><br/></span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;"><font size="4">扶头觞尽可消融。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><br/></span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;"><font size="4">点灯分影半,响屧侧身东。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><br/><br/></span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;"><font size="4">把笔赋诗幽梦远,鹊桥心事雷同。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><br/></span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;"><font size="4">相思折迭问重逢。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><br/></span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;"><font size="4">玉蟾行忐忑,零泪望朦胧。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><br/><br/></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><font size="3"></font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-bidi-font-family: 新細明體; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p>
发表于 2007-3-27 20:05:00 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2007-3-27 20:30:47 | 显示全部楼层
<p>下片稍好些。</p><p>词之语言尽可能做到出口便能听懂,小令尤其如此。可多读多背,培养语感。</p>
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