【如梦令】

秋靈

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="4"><font color="#667b99"><span><strong><font color="#8a916f">&nbsp;&nbsp;【如梦令】</font><br/></strong></span></font></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; COLOR: #2d6d7d; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><br/><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #386149; FONT-FAMILY: simsun; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma;"><font face="Arial" color="#666600" size="4"><strong>金镜空调暖色。红粉不沾清魄。心锈不成篇。铁砚磨穿无策。缄默。缄默。两处相思迷惑。</strong></font></span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #386149; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><br/>

向闲

第三句不好。一但二字也须再酌。

秋靈

<p><font size="4">感謝 先生賜評！改於原處。</font></p><br/>

秋靈

<span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="4"><span><strong><font color="#998566">&nbsp;【如梦令】<span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">之二</span></font></strong></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span><p></p></span></p><p></p><font color="#666699" size="4"><strong>&nbsp;<font color="#666600">重迭光阴折皱。落落寒星漸瘦。长记起风时，一抹晕红心叩。邂逅。邂逅。踽踽天涯守候。</font></strong></font><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p></p></span><p></p><p></p></span>

紫藤

秋灵MM如见！<font size="4"><strong>落落<span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: simsun; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">寒星</span></strong><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: simsun; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma;"><strong>渐瘦，</strong><font size="3">此句想得奇。</font></span></font>

秋靈

謝謝 紫MM！

风过苍筠

<strong>拜赏！</strong>