再步养根兄集安笔会韵

清角吹寒

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">气融楼雪顺檐流，先露东南碧瓦沟。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 24pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">两岸垂杨生鸭绿，一行归雁破人愁。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 24pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">多情独爱江山色，老大犹浮沧海舟。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 24pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">借得春风三五日，尽开桃李快双眸。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 24pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></p>

向闲

首联不佳，后面好。

皎月

也感觉大恶人的首联太随意了.

清角吹寒

<p>我个人倒是认为起的顺畅。</p>