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发表于 2007-5-29 11:02:18 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">一</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">永恒休问有多长,谁见人心海水量?岁月紧催思绪老,风轻云淡是清狂。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">二</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">劝君莫自作多情,休叹残红落水声。自古沙鸥天地客,吟怀偏是累卿卿。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">三</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">虚名来去逐云休,微利去来随水流。莫做红尘名利客,凌波一苇自悠悠。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">四</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">莫信尊前一片真,有谁尘海可交亲?两分酒浅佯成醉,半句痴言便俗人。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><br/>
发表于 2007-5-29 11:29:14 | 显示全部楼层
<p>休叹句没有接上</p><p>重字多未见好</p><p>个别句失律</p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-5-29 13:18:38 | 显示全部楼层
<p>谢倦客兄!:)</p><p>知道重字不好,水平问题没避开。失律处已改。:)</p>
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