[原创] 西江月 写诗感怀

秋水孤帆

<div align="center"><a href="http://blog.sina.com.cn/main/html/showpic.html#url=http://s10.album.sina.com.cn/pic/483a0573020011al" target="_blank"></a><a href="http://blog.sina.com.cn/main/html/showpic.html#url=http://s9.album.sina.com.cn/pic/483a0573020011ak" target="_blank"><img alt="" src="http://s9.album.sina.com.cn/pic_3/483a0573020011ak" border="0"/></a></div><div align="center">&nbsp;</div><p class="MsoBodyTextIndent2" style="TEXT-INDENT: 123.85pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 15pt; mso-char-indent-count: 10.32; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;">&nbsp;<font style="FONT-SIZE: 18px;"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font color="#ff0000">&nbsp; 西江月 写诗感怀 </font></font></font></span></p><p class="MsoBodyTextIndent2" style="MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 15pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 18px;"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font color="#ff0000">粘对韵声依律，起承转合谋篇。孤平拗救救何难，本对句中五变。</font></font></font></span></p><p class="MsoBodyTextIndent2" style="MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 15pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 18px;"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font color="#ff0000">赋比兴为技巧，情观怨是诗源。遣词炼字字新鲜，且忌语空平淡。</font></font></font></span></p><p class="MsoBodyTextIndent2" style="MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 15pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><font color="#0080ff">注：“本对句中五变”：指七言格律诗中本句拗，“三拗五救”，上句拗，对句五字救</font>。</span></p><p class="MsoBodyTextIndent2" style="MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 15pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt;"><span lang="EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <a href="http://blog.sina.com.cn/main/html/showpic.html#url=http://s10.album.sina.com.cn/pic/483a0573020011al" target="_blank"><img height="213" alt="" src="http://s10.album.sina.com.cn/pic_3/483a0573020011al" width="301" border="0" style="WIDTH: 301px; HEIGHT: 213px;"/></a></span></span></p>

诗心云意

欣赏，写诗功夫都在其中，叹结句没有升华。

梅云

以词论诗，可作初学者教材。