还债的两个

青青子佩

<p><strong><font size="3">七律 狼山远眺兼答金水先生</font></strong></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">天边红日巨鼋驮，</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">浩浩长江眼底过。</span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">浪叠千层商舸近，</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">云开万里绿阴多。</span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">无人来共颐生酒，</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">且自微吟待月坡。</span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">好是比邻山与水，</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">还将清梦寄青荷。</span></font></p><p><strong><font size="3">鹧鸪天</font></strong></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3">岂奈浮生俗事忙，今宵风雨又牵肠。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">闲敲文字诗犹冷，倦倚栏杆梦已荒。<br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">叹落蕊，忆行觞，留春无计费商量。</span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3">流年时运多乖蹇，唯剩曾经一段香。</font></span></p>

浔阳倦客

<p>这只鹧鸪可拦腰一劈为二：））让其身首异处</p>

诗心云意

一首大气开阔，二首清雅隽永，欣赏。

抱月斋

楼主的诗词不似女子！有男儿气！

梅云

<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">颇赏“闲敲文字诗犹冷，倦倚栏杆梦已荒”。</span>

湘东诗苑

<p>已赏</p>

华仔

问子佩MM好,一首酬赠结构几成定式了

青青子佩

<p>多谢梅云先生和大家滴鼓励,罗圈揖~~~~</p><p>酬赠结构几成定式了&nbsp;&nbsp;</p><p>[em04]这不成了八股文么?</p><p>555555,天份有限,没办法提高了,就说那鸟,偶都养了快两年了.....</p><p>看来偶是该退隐江湖了[em09]</p>

仰斋

<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">闲敲文字诗犹冷，冷字耐人寻味。极不易得，你从何处得来？</span>

二十八刀

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>浔阳倦客</i>在2007-7-13 10:46:23的发言：</b><br/><p>这只鹧鸪可拦腰一劈为二：））让其身首异处</p></div><p></p>不如一刀全砍了，剁成酱。