战城南

华仔

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">大城如囚，坚池如敌，胡不得出，中心激激。<br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#718;&#805;;">天地惨淡，日月无光，</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">右衽我臂，将赴战场。<br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">左手执戚，右手执戈，战于城南，死当以歌。<br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">左手执弧，右手执矢，战于城北，死当以志。<br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">我马</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#718;&#805;;">虺隤，我目玄黄，白刃如霜，魂魄飞扬。<br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">嗷嗷饥乌，集于灌木，乌兮乌兮，将食我肉。<br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">我肉青春，我血流朱，食我血肉，谓子灵乌。<br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">灵乌有灵，无食我谷，且向山深，食彼狡兔。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p>

殊熠在天

<p>写得挺壮烈的。华仔的仿诗经体都还不错。</p><p>最后那只乌鸦搞得偶有些晕乎，又食人肉又食谷又食兔，倒也杂食得狠。</p>

水击三千

<p>呵呵，华仔在学魏武啊，以乐府牌名写四言。</p><p>不过写激烈还是长短相杂较合适，，，</p>

湘东诗苑

<p>谷莫不是指骨?像是有点讲不通了</p>