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金水

<div id="textstyle_16128" style="ADDING-RIGHT: 0px; MARGIN-TOP: 10px; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; OVERFLOW-X: hidden; WIDTH: 97%; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LINE-HEIGHT: normal; HEIGHT: 200px; WORD-WRAP: break-word;"><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">海滨有寄</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;">
                                <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">凉云来不尽，谁共海风秋。徙倚平沙际，闲愁乱入眸。遥知玉楼梦，应逐此间鸥，相与烟波里，飞飞得自由。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;">
                                <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">登山海关</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;">
                                <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">云涌危楼上，沧桑会此间。潮声喧浩瀚，野色幻斑斓。凭吊情何在，翻修日不闲。当年征战迹，已是几增删。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;">
                        </span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">晚成兄见和：</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;">生日二首用金水公韵 <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">端居无一事，蓦地已逢秋。天气卷如水，阳乌淡入眸。且邀呼酒辈，来共忘机鸥。知否冰霜后，人间不自由。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">其二</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">青春何所似，秋水画船间。摇荡无行止，经过有烁斓。惯看人剧往，相对石孤闲。回首向来处，卅三年已删。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/></span></div>

仰斋

<p>第一首。颔联用流水对，承上启下，此下虽非流水对，畅如流水矣。第二首发端很有气势，笼罩全篇。后半沧桑感脱略旧套，着眼当今，不同凡响。</p><p>晚成君和作亦佳。</p>

金水

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>天堂有鸟</i>在2007-8-16 18:30:51的发言：</b><br/><p>是北戴河海滨吗？</p><p>没来点感慨？</p></div><p>感慨已经明说了呀</p>

水击三千

更喜二首，，近五噫歌，

老土

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">跟在晚成兄后面,拜金公一个.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">有感</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">危楼居已久，叶落不知秋。</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">白日悬孤胆，清风入浊眸。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">慵弹匣中剑，常羡水边鸥。</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">鱼矣诚然美，明朝可自由?</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><br/>

叶子

问老师好，读仰翁评始知诗之所以好！

清风徐来

<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma;">凉云来不尽，谁共海风秋。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma;">徙倚平沙际，闲愁乱入眸。</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma;">遥知玉楼梦，应逐此间鸥，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma;">相与烟波里，飞飞得自由。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: tahoma;">
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燕山燕

金水先生也到山海关了哦。两首都好。“凭吊情何在，翻修日不闲。”确实在翻修城墙东段。

金水

<p>谢各位.</p><p>第二是因为古迹维修大多是将真古迹变成假古董联想到近代史的随意篡改</p>