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丁亥重阳再上五峰山福寿庵,是为黄庭坚《送密老住五峰》道场

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发表于 2007-10-21 17:11:09 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">再度重阳上五峰,四年篷转又湘东。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">诗成韵避山谷险,茶沸香随桂子浓。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">西去渌江流大泽,南飞塞雁入晴空。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">老僧不肯谈因果,只说莳花与种松。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2007</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">年</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">10</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">月</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">21</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">日星期日</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">注:</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2004</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">年曾登五峰山。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">附:</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2004</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">年旧作《</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;">重阳五峰寺题壁》</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">东道邀人作胜游,我来正值五峰秋。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">青枫翠未经霜染,粉壁白先为客留。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">天际浮云生指缝,望中村落绕田畴。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">江山何必属黄贾,代有新诗题上头。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">注:<span lang="EN-US">1</span>、五峰山在萍乡境内。<span lang="EN-US">2</span>、山寺有粉壁供人题咏,上有黄庭坚诗。<span lang="EN-US">3</span>、五峰如佛掌,寺在掌心,故远望云生指缝。<span lang="EN-US">4</span>、寺额:有贾岛来。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p>
发表于 2007-10-21 17:12:57 | 显示全部楼层
全篇皆好 頷聯尤勝 惟不喜首聯
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发表于 2007-10-21 21:10:10 | 显示全部楼层
二联和结都好,觉6句稍费词
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发表于 2007-10-22 12:44:00 | 显示全部楼层
最喜结,我还没动笔呢,,
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-10-22 16:02:18 | 显示全部楼层
<p>当时不是有几个人弄了方竹去栽么!所以老僧只讲种竹的事!</p>
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发表于 2007-10-22 18:05:49 | 显示全部楼层
<p>某早写了一个,现在可悠闲一下了.茶与桂搭配真好,一浓一淡,一艳一清,末某联是大言希声否?正是梅兄说的疏密得宜吗.学习.</p><br/>
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