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发表于 2007-10-22 12:34:38 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 11.25pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">五律 </span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">借绿烟韵</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">/</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">非和,与原题无关</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 11.25pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">风雨征程暗,吾乡谁处询。三年求鲤梦,一夕化烟尘。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 11.25pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">解甲已无望,相持亦可珍。此乎天命者,劳碌百般身。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 11.25pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p>&nbsp;</p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 11.25pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">憾庭秋</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">借御春韵</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">/</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">非和,与原题无关</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 11.25pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">西风知否疲倦,恨席门难掩。一庭清冷,满阶潇索,十年伤感。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 11.25pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">凭栏欲问,乱云谁抹,落红谁点。听征鸿私语,寒蝉细唱,霎时归梵。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 11.25pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p>&nbsp;</p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 11.25pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">浣溪纱</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">借李薏风韵</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">/</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">非和,与原题无关</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 11.25pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">世事由人进退难,梦中梦外影形单,不知何处避秋寒。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">
                        <p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 11.25pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">愁在眉心伤在骨,发于箫管止于弦。一声叹息是终端。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p>
发表于 2007-10-22 20:19:13 | 显示全部楼层
<p>末首最好</p>
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发表于 2007-10-22 21:29:41 | 显示全部楼层
<span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">愁在眉心伤在骨,伤在骨反不似愁在眉深刻.或欲深而反浅?</span>
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发表于 2007-10-23 02:12:24 | 显示全部楼层
<p>寒江兄近作古之伤心人乎?[em01]</p><p>亦最赏末首!其二亦佳!</p>
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发表于 2007-10-23 11:04:44 | 显示全部楼层
千古伤心事,无人送酒来,,[em10]
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