天命(代人作)

水击三千

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">天命方知岁运幽，冥冥莫可问来由。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">何如道悟风前柳，恰似波回江上舟。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">粉墨凋零燕曾识，亭台掩映月空浮。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">倩谁把酒层楼上，万里晴空为豁眸。</span></p>

向闲

上字重出。

一得愚生

为豁眸 何如 一豁眸

水击三千

<p>一得兄之“一”字好。</p><p>层楼上易“层云外”何如？</p>

浔阳倦客

<p>只是不知道请3000兄捉刀者拿去给自己呢还是送别人？不管那种情况怕是中二连的力气都是白费了哈---------是不是有点大而无当？</p>