生查子·晚秋

仰斋

<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt -35.9pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 15.75pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-para-margin-left: -3.42gd; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">生查子·晚秋<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt -35.9pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 15.75pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-para-margin-left: -3.42gd; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">夙夜眷秋光，忽忽秋光暮。急起向东篱，细把馀花数。<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span>欲倩管城兄，徐为倾肝腑。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt -35.9pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 15.75pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-para-margin-left: -3.42gd; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">何若醉金风，高唱骊歌去。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><br/>

林晚晴

<p><font size="2">晨起要锻炼的嘛.晚上闲下来才可以想事儿.</font></p><p><font face="宋体" size="2">急起向东篱，细把馀花数.这句喜欢,但是急起可斟酌?</font></p>

仰斋

<p>回向兄，，前有夙字，避重。急与暮相应接。</p><p>谢林兄，用急，见上。起下因有向字，似可含起身走的意思。</p><p>下片我有修改：</p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt -35.9pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 15.75pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-para-margin-left: -3.42gd; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span></span>欲倩管城兄，心事徐徐诉 。</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">何若醉金风，高唱骊歌去。<span lang="EN-US">
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寒砚

急起向东篱，细把馀花数。真是时不我待。

向闲

夙夜。请教为何不用“晨起”？