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江湖小李

<p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">一</span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">北海苍梧指掌存，五洲不过地球村。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">须弥山碍鲲鹏翼，芥子舟残涨落痕。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">华夏曾传博望渡，美俄先叩广寒门。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">来年要觅莳花地，再遣姮娥向月奔。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2007</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">年</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">11</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">月</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">4</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">日星期日</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">二</font></p></span></p><p><font face="Times New Roman">二</font></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">已悉家书向月奔，蟾宫昨夜启重门。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">迎宾酒候千年绿，折桂云流两袖痕。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">碧海青天除寂寞，金乌玉兔慰寒温。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">下回得晤乡亲面，拟藉归航访故园。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2007</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">年</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">11</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">月</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">4</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">日星期日</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">三</span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">广寒何事启千门？报有佳音向此奔。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">信使几时穷玉宇，仙槎昨夜济河源。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">腾身顿觉日星近，打桨频将云气掀。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">回首齐烟消九点，一弯蓝月正黄昏。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">注：据说，宇航员在太空望地球就像一轮蓝色的月亮。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2007</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">年</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">11</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">月</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">9</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">日星期五</span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;四</font></p></span></p><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;四</font></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">喜朝天</span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">何处生成？几时飞近？千年便惹骚人问。婆娑影里桂枝香，楼台深处婵娟隐。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">“万户”名垂，群英争竟。雄俄霸美留痕印。堂堂华胄岂无为，仙槎已去神州信。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2007</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">年</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">11</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">月</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">10</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">日星期六</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p>

向闲

<p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;">华夏曾传博望渡，美俄先叩广寒门。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"> 博望渡三仄，然专有名词可不计；但华夏与美俄对，差了一字。</span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="宋体">拟籍归航访故园，籍应作藉。作借义时，不但字形有别，读音都不一样。</font></span></p><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-size:10.5pt;">腾身顿觉日星近，打桨频将云气掀。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"> 喜欢这一联！<p></p></span></p><p></p></span><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p>

江湖小李

谢过!藉改!窃以为美俄可浑一(笑!)华夏可分二(笑!君不见台湾\交址\高丽,另华与夏也不同的!)

泠锋

用韵是否一部?偶粗浅,望赐教!

无稽斋主

兄同题而为多首,吟兴堪羡!

虔青草

喜二三四！

林晚晴

<p>第一首的结句不合适。</p><p>颇有不错的句子。如二的颔联，三的尾联……</p>

寒砚

<p>五洲不过地球村,用五洲再用地球村，有些板。村可用。</p><p>三首后半极其喜欢。</p>