七律 奔月（二首）

林晚晴

<p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">其一</font></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">渺茫相隔在乾坤，圆缺照人还断魂。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">怒待挽弓难相射，悔教偷药不同奔。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">情缘成梦空千载，月色如倾只一樽。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">但看重霄明镜里，垂垂泪滴有余温。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><br/><br/><font face="Times New Roman">其二</font></span></p><p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">当时忍泪冲天问：何事教卿向月奔？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">寂夜流晖风失语，孤云渡影水无痕。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">纵因永寿为人羡，怕有深情与恨存。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">离合若将等闲视，从今缘分再休论！</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><br/></span></p><p>*江右社课"奔月"&nbsp;七律限压奔字，一时手痒，试为之，请诸君指正。</p>

林晚晴

<p><font face="宋体">虔青草兄好：）</font></p><p><font face="宋体">出题人没有说要提嫦娥号吧？我又翻了一下：</font></p><p><font face="仿宋_GB2312">主题：奔月<br/>一、诗：七律&nbsp;限压“奔”字<br/>二、词：踏莎行，韵限《词林正韵》第六部，调依晏同叔《细草愁烟》</font></p><p><font face="">别的没了。</font></p>

虔青草

这两首似乎都限于对嫦娥的描写，未着墨于《嫦娥》一号，或者与题旨不合？