[原创]见农村占用耕地建房者甚多，忧心不已

弘云居士

<p style="BACKGROUND: white; WORD-BREAK: break-all;"><font size="3"><font face="宋体"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="COLOR: red; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma;">见农村占用耕地建房者甚多，忧心不已</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: tahoma;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></b></font></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p style="BACKGROUND: white; WORD-BREAK: break-all;"><font size="3"><font face="宋体"><span style="COLOR: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma;">基奠青苗下，墙挑子嗣肩。宏观十三亿，能断灶中烟？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #222222; FONT-FAMILY: tahoma;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></font></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p style="BACKGROUND: white; WORD-BREAK: break-all;"><span style="COLOR: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma;"><font face="宋体" size="3">上溯五千载。不需身上棉？谁家安乐屋，竟占我粮田。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #222222; FONT-FAMILY: tahoma;"></span></p>

草啸

<p>感觉整体表达上，还是有些问题。</p><p>占我口粮田。</p>

仰斋

<p>不错。全用律体平仄，不对仗。古人偶一有之。如李白《夜泊牛渚怀古》，皎然《寻陆鸿渐不遇》，俱见《唐诗三百首》。近来少见，亦不妨一试。</p>

弘云居士

谢草兄，仰老临贴指教～～敬烈酒～～[em10][em10][em10][em10]