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风露中宵

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">草肠铮骨志何求</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">, </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">汗洒人间莫问愁。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">两角从容挑日月</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">, </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">一肩寂寞载春秋</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">初生有胆斗豺虎，老死无缘填壑沟。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">.</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">注：死后，肉将被食，皮骨皆为人用。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">终愿苍生俱饱暖，鞭声响处思悠悠。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p><p></p><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p><p></p><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;结联出句化用李纲《病牛》</font><font face="Times New Roman">但愿苍生俱饱暖，不辞劳苦出山林。</font></p>

草啸

<p>三四五六七句后两字，词语类同。</p><p>轮回寂寞，亦未贴切。整体刻画有失力度。</p><p></p>

风露中宵

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>草啸</i>在2007-12-14 12:40:53的发言：</b><br/><p>三四五六七句后两字，词语类同。</p><p>轮回寂寞，亦未贴切。整体刻画有失力度。</p><p></p></div><p></p>多谢草兄，又修改一下。请再次雅正。