炉边闲咏(续七）

仰斋

<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>折枝</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">沃若窗前树，繁荣无夏冬。连宵苦冰雪，伟干变龙钟。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">断臂君何罪，残民孰最兇。曦车生四角，行视强支筇。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">封路</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">遑论愁行旅，出门犹大艰。川原严冻结、步履慎蹒跚。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">遵陆豺当道，腾天虎守关。嗟嗟众游子，桑梓几时还！</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><br/><br/>

无稽斋主

于幽慨中蕴仁心，甚佩！

颖庐

越续越见精采！若以此二章言，《折枝》胜出，《封路》非不佳，似稍直白。

草啸

<p>给仰老拜个早年：祝您老新春吉祥，大作多多！</p><p>拜读。</p>

仰斋

<p>谢无稽兄清赏。草啸兄贺年，同贺。</p><p>颖庐意见甚好。已将颈联修改。</p>

剑尘

中似有春秋在！＂<font face="宋体">辜＂仄读，通＂故＂，此用之以求古，妄揣不知对否？</font>[em04]

水击三千

意尤深

仰斋

剑尘真解人。我初作罪。忽又想到辜，雅一些。音不合，可借通故之音，即解作故，亦佳。你一提，倒使我想到此种通用已罕见，还是用罪好。

湘东诗苑

<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-ansi-language:zh-cn;mso-font-kerning:0pt;;">学习，</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-ansi-language:zh-cn;mso-font-kerning:0pt;;">断臂君何罪，残民孰最兇。天禍犹可禳，人祸不可恕。</span></p>

兼葭苍苍

来学习地~~~~~~~半知四分之一解，不敢妄言。