和熊东遨兄贺年诗

向闲

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font size="5"><strong><font color="#ee1111">经年碍病酒难斟，诗意唯从故纸寻。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font size="5"><strong><font color="#ee1111">数载风霜催皓首，满城爆竹跳童心。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font size="5"><strong><font color="#ee1111">夜吞岁杪轻轻亮，春越梅端悄悄临。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font size="5"><strong><font color="#ee1111">冰雪不封良友讯，手机脆脆报佳音。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><p><font color="#ee1111" size="5"><strong>&nbsp;</strong></font></p></span></p>

湘东诗苑

粗率，

仰斋

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_;"><font size="5"><strong><font color="#ee1111">经年碍病酒难斟，写实。诗意唯从故纸寻。经验之谈。</font></strong></font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_;"><font size="5"><strong><font color="#ee1111"><span lang="EN-US">&nbsp;<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_;"><font size="5"><strong><font color="#ee1111">数载风霜催皓首，夸张不太过分。满城爆竹跳童心。正合儿童特点，亦合中年以后人思旧心情。</font></strong></font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_;"><font size="5"><strong><font color="#ee1111">夜吞岁杪轻轻亮，春越梅端悄悄临。此联大佳，诗味浓浓，吞，越，轻轻。悄悄，皆极工。结联亦可。<span lang="EN-US">
                                                                                                                <p></p></span></font></strong></font></span></span></p><p></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_;"></span></p></span></font></strong></font></span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_;"><font size="5"><strong><font color="#ee1111">数载风霜催皓首，夸张不太过分。满城爆竹跳童心。正合儿童特点，亦合中年以后人思旧心情。</font></strong></font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_;"><font size="5"><strong><font color="#ee1111">夜吞岁杪轻轻亮，春越梅端悄悄临。此联大佳，诗味浓浓，吞，越，轻轻。悄悄，皆极工。结联亦可。<span lang="EN-US">
                                                                <p></p></span></font></strong></font></span></span></p><p></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_;"></span></p>

颖庐

中二联尤喜对句。

剑尘

<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_;"><font size="5"><strong><font color="#ee1111">数载风霜催皓首，满城爆竹跳童心。</font></strong></font></span>

鄱湖渔歌

欣赏

向闲

谢谢各位！昨天中午收到东遨兄从手机发来的诗，匆匆和了一首。自知浅陋，然吟长赐作不敢不应。预祝各位春节快乐！

江湖小李

体现向闲兄一惯明快清新的风格特点，但作为临屏，还是可见习气！

一得愚生

惟"跳"乃平声 微瑕

秋靈

<span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-bidi-font-family: 新細明體; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">"</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">跳</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">"</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">亦有一歸</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-fareast-font-family: 新細明體;">&nbsp;</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: SimSun; mso-hansi-font-family: SimSun;">去聲十八嘯。</span></font></p></span>