【题画—傀儡戏】

秋靈

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="3"><font color="#5e87a2"><strong><span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">纤纤丝线挂炎凉，离合移时一世长。<br/></span></strong></font></font><font size="3"><font color="#5e87a2"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><strong>同等悲欢同抆泪，台前台后尽荒唐。<br/><br/></strong></span></font></font><font size="3"><font color="#5e87a2"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">〈红楼梦</span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">&#8231;</span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">第一回：「满纸荒唐言，一把辛酸泪，都云作者痴，谁解其中味。」〉<br/><br/><br/></span></font></font><font size="3"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">画作：王志雄<br/></span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><font size="3"><font face="Times New Roman"><p></p></font></font></span></p><p></p><p></p>

秋靈

<p><span style="COLOR: black;"><font face="新細明體">謝評！容酌<span lang="EN-US"> ^_^<p></p></span></font></span></p><p><span style="COLOR: black;"><font face="新細明體">「</font></span><span><strong><span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-bidi-font-family: 新細明體; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;">纤纤丝线挂炎凉</span></strong></span><font face="新細明體"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="COLOR: black;">」、「</span></b><strong><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-bidi-font-family: 新細明體; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;">离合移时一世长</span></strong><span style="COLOR: black;">」欲表達情境有別。一是人情冷暖，一是時間短長。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></font></p><p></p>

向闲

第二句表达上是不是还可改进。

草啸

<p><span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-FAMILY: simsun; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><strong><font color="#5e87a2">纤纤丝线挂炎凉，斯句足以道之。</font></strong></span></p><p><span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-FAMILY: simsun; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><strong><font color="#5e87a2">移时一世，读起来，稍不爽。</font></strong></span></p>