杂感

水击三千

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草啸

<p>首联改得比原稿好。</p><p>道，或人或民似更宜。觉此处，用平声口感好。</p><p>欲字，觉硬。翻新如何？</p>

水击三千

谢草兄，兄意我再细想

剑尘

<p>看到小水的律就知道他懒[em01]</p>

向闲

草啸之见甚是。

阿咸

同草兄，翻新，刷新，更新放在句中都比欲新好，有人说世界一天一个样子，欲字就有些不准确了。