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发表于 2008-4-15 19:24:38 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">久安已自怯刀兵</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-fareast-font-family: PMingLiU;">.</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">詎使西山幻雨晴</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-fareast-font-family: PMingLiU;">.</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">天心暗昧殊難料</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-fareast-font-family: PMingLiU;">.</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">世象紛紜究未明</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-fareast-font-family: PMingLiU;">.</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">空嗟雪域千年白</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-fareast-font-family: PMingLiU;">.</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">俱化腥雲一夕橫</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-fareast-font-family: PMingLiU;">.</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">投筆<span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">恥</span>為風月賦</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-fareast-font-family: PMingLiU;">.</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">厭將春事入前盟</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-fareast-font-family: PMingLiU;">.</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p>
发表于 2008-4-15 19:28:21 | 显示全部楼层
<p>好诗写西藏的吧</p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-4-15 19:59:34 | 显示全部楼层
谢倦兄,键盘坏了,不多说~
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发表于 2008-4-15 20:43:29 | 显示全部楼层
鸡毛满地,一声叹息,,
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发表于 2008-4-17 09:14:54 | 显示全部楼层
评诗有三条标准:美、真、识,用这个标准来品评这首诗,除略空之外不失为是一首好诗!
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发表于 2008-4-17 09:24:26 | 显示全部楼层
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">谁封达赖与班禅?自古西陲事最难!</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">征战由来多白骨,和亲曾此重红颜。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">一堆青冢黄昏后,万仞珠峰落照间。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">佛子承祧关国祚,布宫雪岭暗云翻。——这是一首写于90年左右的旧作。</span></p>
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发表于 2008-4-17 11:28:34 | 显示全部楼层
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">一堆青冢黄昏后,万仞珠峰落照间。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"> 最为凄凉,<p></p></span></p><p></p>
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发表于 2008-4-17 20:02:22 | 显示全部楼层
要融合成一个民族,并非那么简单的事情,要经过很长时间的磨合.
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发表于 2008-4-17 20:30:56 | 显示全部楼层
<span lang="ZH-TW" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: pmingliu; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-fareast-language: zh-tw; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">天心暗昧,稍过。天在诗中往往是道之象,未必暗昧。</span>
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发表于 2008-4-17 20:54:38 | 显示全部楼层
<p><font size="5"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: pmingliu; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: zh-tw;">空嗟雪域千年白</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: zh-tw; mso-fareast-font-family: pmingliu;">.</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: pmingliu; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-language: zh-tw;">俱化腥雲一夕橫。颇见笔力。</span></font></p>
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